Botond Bense

Direct Response Copywriting & Funnels for eCom stores struggling with cold traffic

[Botond Bense @BotondBense]

Day 30-30

Rewriting Headlines+Subheadlines For Advertorials I Find On Meta Ads Library

Today's the final day of this little 30 day challenge

I Looked back at these last 30 posts and I see a massive difference so I definitely learned a lot, and will keep going with similar things in the future

I'm going on a vacation for a week, but will try to keep up the work

Happy weekend for everyone👊

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Day 29-30

Rewriting Headlines+Subheadlines For Advertorials I Find On Meta Ads Library

For this one I stayed with the same angle and tryed to make it better

lmk if it bangs

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@berronoliver I appreciate it mate👊

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Day 28-30

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Day 27-30

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Today has been a more productive day finally, we keep pushin

lmk if you have any suggestions or you think the copy and design bangs

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Day 26-30

Rewriting Headlines+Subheadlines For Advertorials I Find On Meta Ads Library

Had a big rest during the weekend, I feel fresh again, I'm getting there,

Hopefully this week will be much better

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Day 25-30

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Been struggling with input these last few days, trying to change a few things and strategys rn for better efficiency

Talking about the copy, I choose this because I felt like they tryed to include every possible claim, which is a bit too much and customers could feel baited by it

Also their design lacked CTA's and basic elements

Happy weekend for everybody!

[Botond Bense @BotondBense]

Day 24-30

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Today was a slow day, but learned a lot of stuff that will be helpful in the future

Happy Wednesday!

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Day 23-30

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Today's selection's main problem was that, It was just to long

It also didn't sound like there is a solution coming and missed benefit

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Day 22-30

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I got sick again, but this time I was barely able to leave my bed, so I spent the whole weekend around my bed and resting

First day back finally, hopefully through this shit

Happy monday,

[Botond Bense @BotondBense]

@AParavantsos G shit

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@kdiosann What typa landing page do you use?

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@Leozidas have the same razer headseat G

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@ecmsun How does your tracker work mate?

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Day 21-30

Rewriting Headlines+Subheadlines For Advertorials I Find On Meta Ads Library

Today I didn't make much progress, could've worked more, I bitched out for a few hours,

Aiming for more tomorrow

Now, talking about the copy, the brands original was the most common and template based headline you could imagine, so I had to change it,

With today's copy I focused more on the emotional side of curiosity, trying to perfect it

Their design was very meh, but not terrible

lmk if you have any suggestion or advice

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@iam_kiennguyen congrats brother, only up from here

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@zdb4s printing

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Day 20-30

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Today I finally feel better, so we're accelerating the grind

As for the copy and design, their original copy was short and obviously written with chatgpt, with not that much curiosity creation, but also lacked clearness

Their design wasn't well optimised for mobile and their layout was strange

Speakin about my version

I think I made a good job with balancing curiosity and clearness and how to copy flows

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Day 19-30
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Still sick

I almost took off the day, but then sat down and made a full advertorial, did my daily post and worked on automations

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@zdb4s Bro, your growth in the last 1-2 weeks have been crazy