Dominic Thomas

Proud GSU Eagle. Future productionist. class of 2025

[Dominic Thomas @Dnict87]

#ReflectOn1101
One of the most important discoveries I've made this semester is how important drafts are and how much I can use them. Before this class, I didn't write drafts. I just wrote something and turned it in. Now, drafts are apart of my writing process.

[Dominic Thomas @Dnict87]

#ReflectOn1101
I've added the skill of being able to adjust my writing for my audience. That's something I've always struggled with but I feel like I'm better at that now. I know how to identify my audience and the points I need to hit for them to understand my writing.

[Dominic Thomas @Dnict87]

#ReflectOn1101
I was stressed out about writing my 200 word analysis. I was struggling finding sources that would help me and I planned not to write one. Then I decided not to give up and keep trying and I was able to meet the requirements for the analysis.

[Dominic Thomas @Dnict87]

#ReflectOn1101
In the future, I plan to use the cut up method. Sometimes, I'm unsure whether my transitions flow together or if there's a good enough connection between my ideas. With this method, I'll be able to know whether my flow needs work or not and how to improve it.

[Dominic Thomas @Dnict87]

#ReflectOn1101
My writing process at the beginning of the year was bad. I didn't really write drafts for revision. I just wrote and whatever came out, I turned in. Now, drafts are an important part of my process. I now value drafts and need them to be the best writer I can be.

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@Chris_Scalzi1 one concern i have is if the text is easy to read and not overwhelming. I tried to break it up so there's not just big chunks of text. Another concern I have is if it's too boring. Do i need to add more pictures?

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The word count has been reached for the majority of the text. There are a few sections left needed to be edited.

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#Project2Workshop i also want to check that all my text reaches the required word count

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All text now are alike and resemble each other. This is good for the consistency of the exhibit.

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#Project2Workshop i want to edit all my text so that its equally spaced and readible

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#Project2WrapUp how many points is the 300 word analysis worth? I didn't see it on the rubric.

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By seeing which ending is most popular among players, it can be determined that a understanding exists among players because to reach that specific ending, players must intentionally choose to go in that direction with the game.

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#analyzethis1101
I am analyzing Detroit: Become Human. It effectively connects the audience to the perspective of the villain and creates an understanding of why hard choices must be made.

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I'm defining the success of this composition by the end result reached by those who've played the game. This game has several different endings. A player can view how many people who've played the game reached each specific ending.

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@KolbySm46610265 That's a good idea. I'm gonna add that to mine instead of using my images as hyperlinks

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I want to add more color to my site to help immerse my audience.

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@BodekerJoshua @MargotMauk1101 I agree. A good way to do that is by using a good color scheme to emphasize the important content for your audience.

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@AlyssaFink12 That's a good idea. That also draws emphasis on your content and effectively gets your point across to your viewers.

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@KolbySm46610265 I agree with this. Spacing is important to audiences. Too much info bunched together overloads a viewer and turns them away.

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I can use color for my website by choosing to employ a color palette that has enough contrasts that attracts and leads my audience. Certain sections will use eye catching color while less important sections won't be as emphasized.