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@AustinWyckes

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@AustinWyckes can i show u how it is now that i've edited it?

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@wildflwrnev i've edited it, may i present it to u? x

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@AustinWyckes your words are actually loving, thank you for them.

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@Mukudayo @wildflwrnev so your advice is to slow things down in the opening?

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@AustinWyckes ur critique was lovely, and very much needed! xx 🌹

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@Mukudayo @wildflwrnev bc of it being cut off in the screenshot (17 chapters so far) it will throw ppl off lol but it's basically a death scene . i've replied to others about context, so check them out x

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@maundacity @wildflwrnev yeah bc i wrote it i just wanted ur guys opinion babe😭

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@starr39556 @wildflwrnev i've got 17 chapters and running, babe so i do feel bc of how cut off it is in the screenshot it will throw readers who see it here, off

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@Yukinohara777 @wildflwrnev death. inheritance, trauma, grief, love.

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@wildflwrnev noted x

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@wildflwrnev think of 'acts edition' as the new testament. the chapters (including the prologue are in roman numerals to fit the gothic prose) and the opening scene is death. but ofc, there's more to it (17 chapters and running), so.

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