Jonathan.

Jonathan Anderson, @EmpereusENT 's plot checker and points giver. [just hit my DMs for further help.]

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@EME_Rosie @EME_Stupakoff - explore lagi pemilihan diksinya, yang lainnya sudah baik!

Main Points: 22 pts +6 pts
Bonus Points: 5 pts

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@EME_Rosie @EME_Stupakoff - sangat dapat. EYD sudah baik. Namun Hailey, yang baku itu 'napas' ya. Sudah itu saja, dan juga -

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@EME_Rosie @EME_Stupakoff Wah kenapa endingnya menggantung begitu? Hailey kamu sama saya aja. /55

Ah chemistry antar karakter yang -

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@EME_ManuR @EME_Chance

Bonus Points: 5 pts

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@EME_ManuR @EME_Chance

-mana hatiku senang." Lalu tidak dipisah kalau "dituliskan" "dimakan" "diminum."

Main Points: 77 pts +4 pts

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@EME_ManuR @EME_Chance

- diperhatikan ya. Penggunaan kata 'di' jika diikuti dengan tempat, dipisah "di sini" "di sana" "di mana-

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@EME_ManuR @EME_Chance Menurut saya alurnya sudah baik dan kejelasan serta kelogisan ceritanya juga. Namun EYD kalian harus lebih -

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@EME_Barakat @EME_Rosie

Bonus points: 5 pts

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@EME_Barakat @EME_Rosie - diperhatikan lagi ya pemakaian kata 'di'-nya. Dipisah untuk tempat, "di sini."

Main points: 179 pts +6 pts

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@EME_Barakat @EME_Rosie EYD sudah baik, tata bahasa dan alur cerita juga chemistry karakter terasa oleh pembaca. Untuk Hailey, -

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Sebentar ya saya reset following dulu

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@EME_Camila bonus points: 5 pts

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@EME_Camila Selamat pagi Jacqun! Eyd pas cerita dan alur ringan sudah baik! Tingkatkan lagi diksimu.

Main points: 53 pts +7 pts

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@EME_Dehaan -- fan fiction.

Main points: 14 pts + 9 pts
Bonus points: 4 pts

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@EME_Dehaan -- funny to read. Diksinya sudah bagus juga, jadi saya bingung mau ngoreksi gimana. Although bahasa kamu kaya penulis --

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@EME_Dehaan Hey there, infant. I'm glad Empereus has a baby though. [chuckles]

Well, back to work. So, your plot is good and it's kinda --

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@EME_roberts -- kasarnya.

Main points: 20 pts + 8 pts
Bonus points: 5 pts

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@EME_roberts -- chemistry. There's nothing wrong in your plot, but maybe you have to learn more vocabulary. Buat nambahin diksi, --

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@EME_roberts Hello, Belavey. I admire your relationship with Kian, indeed I can see through your plot that you have a brother-sister --

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@EME_Gal -- next time. The rest is fine.

Main points: 18 pts + 8 pts
Bonus points: 5 pts