Raj S

English Class

[Raj S @ENGRajS]

@ENG3UE_Poetry The title of your poem is a great one as it has a good symbolistic meaning to it

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@ENG3UE_Poetry Could've have used something like a PowerPoint or some music for the background to enhance the performance even more

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@ENG3UE_Poetry Really felt like you guys put a lot of effort into this which is great!

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@ENG3UE_Poetry there was also a lot of pauses in between which could have been fixed

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@ENG3UE_Poetry could have practiced more to avoid abrutions in the performance

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #Whoareyou I really liked the message of a society without discrimination and that was a positive point

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@ENG3UE_Poetry there was some reading off so that could have been improved but otherwise a great presentation overall

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #Ourlivesarevalid great voice projection and great message with a lot of sync within this group which made the pres go smooth

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@ENG3UE_Poetry a little more rehearsal would be beneficial for next time as there were many pauses in between

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #Doyouseeme great topic and I liked how you had many parts to say together

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@ENG3UE_Poetry one thing to improve on is memorization because you guys were reading off a lot

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #weareblind amazing message and I really liked the use of PowerPoint

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@ENG3UE_Poetry also great clarity with your voices and they were projected well

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@ENG3UE_Poetry also I liked how you guys incorporated different parts to say together and it worked out

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@ENG3UE_Poetry could've rehearsed some more for next time

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #whatdoyousee great message about racism and the portrayal of stereo types

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@ENG3UE_Poetry An amazing poem, and I thoroughly enjoyed it because of the message displayed about societal views.

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #whatdoyouexpect great spoken word with clear voices.. May want to keep pace more consistent (sped up too much at times)

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@ENG3UE_Poetry #Whatislove Awesome memorization for the most part, and great sync between the members. Try to avoid slouching for next time.

[Raj S @ENGRajS]

@ENG3UE_Poetry #Hey great confidence and clarity, also sounded smooth. May want to consider adding another element (music, powerpoint etc)