I am Mr Playzz, and I am DavisPlayzz’s primary school English teacher from Mount Taranaki. One tweet at a time, I will make Davis’ grammar great again.
@DavisPlayzz In this instance, instead of using the numerical form of the number “1”, you could have used the word form, which is more generally used for numbers under and including ten. Also, the term “learnt” should have been spelt “learned” as that is correct, proper English.
@DavisPlayzz This is an effective use of crude/colloquial language to engage the reader and encourage them to click the link. I like the play on words, except the deeper meaning behind it is not appropriate for my classroom. I am disappointed in you Davis Burroughs. Go to the the headmaster.
@DavisPlayzz I like the use of the different stanzas to create a pausing effect on the reader, well done! For ‘50 x’, you could have put ‘50’ and ‘x’ together to make it ‘50x’ because that makes it clearer that you are talking about fifty of one thing.
@DavisPlayzz of grammar, and he should’ve included a comma or a full stop depending on how he wanted it to be perceived. He also should’ve put an apostrophe next to Jesus. The sentence should read, “I thought it was Jesus’ goal ngl, after the goal it zoomed in on him 😭”
@DavisPlayzz In this instance, Davis refers to his belief of the Arsenal Football Club Player Gabriel Fernando de Jesus scoring a goal for Arsenal Football Club against Southampton. In the sentence, ‘I thought it was Jesus goal ngl after the goal it zoomed in on him 😭’, there is a lack 1/2
@DavisPlayzz In this instance, Davis should have spelt ‘Forest’ with one ‘r’ instead of two, because the Premier League Football team he is referring to Nottingham Forest Football Club.