Adunni

Teacher. Love kids.

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@grok Not working

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@grok why can't I change my username

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@reaperaix Meditations

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@akafaceUS Audiobook of Meditations of Marcus Aurelius Antoninus.

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@sciencegirl Only a woman can do that.

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@leroyeferaomo @Morris_Monye Literacy is not the yardstick to measuring intelligence.

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@ask_stan_peters @_Chavey Looked back at the mirror?

Looked back at him?

But if you insist, you could be right.

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@KAwusa @_Chavey Yes.

I don't criticize his creative ability, I'm only encouraging him to check for loopholes.

Writers pay to be proofread and criticized.

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@ask_stan_peters @_Chavey Did you read when he looked at the rear view mirror?

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@Jesse4kiss @_Chavey When the passenger asked him to look at the rear view mirror?

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@IAgbor90339 @_Chavey It's there in the story. He didn't have to spell it out.

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@nana_kwame_dee @_Chavey Yes... But even fictions should sound like real life experience.

That's why we should check the believability of our stories...

Doesn't take anything away from the imaginative ability of the writer.

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@iTrollKiller @_Chavey Maybe.

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@chikanwankwo1 @_Chavey Another angle.

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@Manjaro_Nawaya @_Chavey Thanks.

We learn everyday.

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@_Chavey Nice story.

Critique 1: How do you see the feet of someone who's at the back seat?

2: How do you see the back of his shirt if he's sitting?

Watch out for loopholes.

Interesting nonetheless, and somewhat believable.

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@WhatsApp She's no longer if this world.

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@femmymafia @_DebbieOA I'd rather give sporty.

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@Whizbang10_ @_DebbieOA Private schools dem don open Sef.

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@AHahnPeters Both. Depends on who and what part of dreamland I was.