So, there's this thing that I've been seeing on a lot of writing advice videos, articles, etc. Anyway, the writing advice I see is that you should omit adverbs, adjectives, filler words, and other stuff.
i know that the sun is good / on your skin, and even better in a / room with windows, wide, new bedframe and / same mattress. i have held / you for three years. i do not know how much / longer i will hold you.
The baby was born in winter, and because it was cold, he got sick often. Every time they went to the hospital, it was just her and her baby alone together. Her husband was too busy with work to take time off and help.
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