Mohamed oubaddaj

I write plain-English pitch templates for new freelance copywriters. Free checklist + weekly tips ↓

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

The First Client Kit: 25 pitch templates, 15 Claude prompts and a Notion tracker for new freelance copywriters.
Send your first 20 pitches in 5 days, no portfolio needed.
Free checklist in the link below ↓

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.

Free checklist + 5 openers:
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

A first pitch can fit in five lines.

1. Their name
2. One real observation
3. A one-line sample fix
4. One easy question
5. Your name

Short is easier to answer. (The free checklist has the exact template if you want it).

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@iamrichygold The customer service deletes it part is brutal but true. This is exactly why I'm focusing on quality over quantity. Finding the actual decision-maker takes longer, but sending 20 personalized pitches beats 1,000 deleted emails.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@BuzzMalx Clear Outcome is so underrated. It feels too simple to write, but it's the only one that actually stops the scroll for me when I'm actively looking for a solution.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@dimitarangg The zero of them are about him part is exactly what I'm trying to unlearn. It feels natural to introduce yourself first, but a specific observation is what actually keeps them reading.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@salesxsaas When using cold email for top executives, how short do you usually keep it? I'm guessing it has to be way leaner than a standard pitch to get read at that level.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@itscarmencruick The pretty Notion board line hits home. I'm building a tracker right now, but I'm realizing the real value isn't just saving 100 templates—it's forcing myself to write down why an ad works before I save it.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@MrColdEmail The bulk order and lookalike names are wild. Even if the domain is clean, I'm learning that sending the exact same template to 50 people will get you flagged just as fast as a bad domain."

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

@mladenovic878 Research is the base. I've been trying to practice this by finding one specific, checkable line on a prospect's site before writing anything else. Changes the whole approach.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.
Free checklist + 5 openers:
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Your first pitch has one job: show you read their page.
Say a bakery's menu says "we bake with love" but never says what's fresh. Open with that. Then offer one line that fixes it.
Beats "I'm a passionate copywriter."
Reply CLIENT for the free checklist.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

If you're building something too, I'd love to hear what you're working on.
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.

Free checklist + 5 openers:
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.

Free checklist + 5 openers : https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

The First Client Kit: 25 pitch templates, 15 Claude prompts and a Notion tracker for new freelance copywriters.
Send your first 20 pitches in 5 days, no portfolio needed.
Free checklist in the link below ↓

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Where to find your observation. Look for one of five things:

1. An unclear headline
2. A vague offer
3. A missing next step
4. No reason to trust them
5. A tone that doesn't fit their readers

Free checklist + 5 openers: https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

The 5-line cold email new copywriters can actually send.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.

Free checklist + 5 openers:
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Can't find an email? Don't guess one.

Check the Contact page, a listed email, or a public LinkedIn or Instagram profile.

No clear route in 2 minutes? Move on. There are plenty of other prospects.

Reply CLIENT for the free checklist.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

If you're building something too, I'd love to hear what you're working on. https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Build log: I'm building this entire kit on my phone. No laptop.

Canva for layout, Notion for the tracker, Claude for drafts.

I learned how to design a pdf on Canva using only my phone.

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

Extra tip: when you read a page, look for one of five things: an unclear headline, a vague offer, a missing call to action, no reason to trust them, or a tone that doesn't fit.

Free checklist + 5 openers:
https://t.co/qbaKKgRosd

[Mohamed oubaddaj @MO_FirstClient]

No portfolio? Say it once, plainly.

"I'm new, so I don't have past work to show. Here's a one-line sample for your page instead."

No apology. No hiding. Just a small, honest offer.

Reply CLIENT for the free checklist.