ik some people have a hard time putting their thoughts into words, but considering it’s something you’re experiencing firsthand, you should probably try your best to articulate it
i feel like a good tip for those having a hard time commenting is to mention what specific part of the fic you enjoyed and how it made you feel. it could be a scene or a sentence, and if you’re able even something about the prose or characterization. the more specific the better
After Old Lumière, Maelle gets really quiet. Verso just saved her and called her “Alicia,” so was she beginning to remember her real life here? But as she watched him talk about the axons, maybe she was thinking, “No…I can’t know this guy. He’s an idiot.”
I either can’t find the post I made about this preggy!maelle fic or I didn’t make one, but anyway I have updated it 🙂↕️ #versaelle
https://t.co/SAb4mbsRWv