Tim

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

@RyanRichman51 could that also be used to have a greater impact on the reader

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

In The Jungle, Sinclair uses strong and forceful wording to show how the workers were desperate.

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

@fava_dominic do you think that the short sentences could show the fear instead?

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

In the jungle, Sinclair uses run on sentences to show the complicating of the meat packing industry to prove they had many bad qualities.

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

@ryan_wendell interesting, although you can understand a persons body language and not a birds.

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

In the jungle, Sinclair uses the word victim, to show how the people in the meat industry were in the grip of destruction and had no idea.

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

Shelley shows the contrast of monster vs man by the fact that the monster is not accepted in humanity, even though he tries to help others.

[Tim @TimJBurroughs]

@Nicolette_2014 I agree. Victor and the de Lacey family never gave the monster a chance and now they will never know how nice he truly was.