@joelindsey@JasenThorpe I see this more as an immersive, interactive metaverse AI NFT piece, wherein you get to race against the wrongdoers of your choice on one of the old Emmaus lunch routes
@shaneferro Sorry I added to whatever stress youโre experiencing over this. If it matters, I meant โpersonallyโ not in terms of personality but as opposed to professionally: Critiquing this specific story (the editing) not the person (the editor). As I said, Iโve heard heโs a good editor.
@shaneferro@dlberes Someone whoโs worked with you at another outlet, Damon, tells me that youโre a good editor, by the way. I wouldnโt consider this a well-edited piece, though, no matter how well it might have done for you in traffic.
@shaneferro@dlberes Even beyond the failure to locate a strong narrative or premise, the editing allows the misguided writer to get away with several to many statements that simply donโt hold up under any kind of factual or logical check