I don't claim to know what everyone else's sex life is like but there's clearly a lot more conversation mid sex in fics, and it's probs not normal, but it's called moving the plot forward, baby! (also there are only so many words for sexual positions and it gets real weird.)
I'm working on some stuff, but in the meantime, if you wanna read a smutty fun oneshot where Pen is ovulating and absolutely feral, check out Egg Drop Pen. @polinbookclub#polinfic
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So basically he showed up right as they were leaving, and his valet probably unloaded his bags to bring into the house, and someone must have brought out his proper garden party clothing, but then he had to be like "wait, Dunwoody! I need my pretty new waistcoat from my satchel."
curious if any writers have strong opinions on writing in present tense or past tense. I've switched to present, and sometimes it's easier, but sometimes I feel like past reads better.