Gia literally doesn't care about what she did and she clearly doesn't regret grooming Zephyr and sees herself as the victim, with that mindset she'll groom more kids because she doesn't see any wrong in her actions at all and thinks it's the kid's fault
watching two or three youtube videos on how to improve your writing skills can genuinely work wonders, look up things like character building, world building, pacing tips, how to use themes… using metaphor is a personal favorite of mine
"Oh yeah, Jiggle Boy made me these 'yoyletatoes'. I'm down to my last fry, but... meh, what can you do about it? I'm not really having fun doing this, so I think I'll just quit soon. Anyways, get digging Pin, the yoyletatoes need to be harvested underground!"