Jade

reading • traveling • rock music

[Glenn @Shenaniglenns]

Hagrid: you’re a gizzard Harry

Harry: i’m a what

Hagrid: a blizzard

Harry: a what

Hagrid: a scissors

Harry: what

Hagrid [in tears, trying so hard]: a squidward

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help with revising my introduction. What else should I be including here? How can I incorporate my ethos? #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help revising my sample blog post content. How can I make my suggestions more appealing? #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help with breaking up this text more. Any suggestions? #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help revising my executive summary. I’m not quite sure what else I’m supposed to include. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

Any suggestions on how I can enhance/revise my graph? It’s meant to emphasize my data analysis. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I’m going to upload my voice through PowerPoint. I’m going to write a script for what I want to say during the presentation and time it so I’m sure I’ll be at 5 minutes. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

My plan to develop my LOHF Web Analysis presentation is to make a PowerPoint of my key elements and do a voice-over for my audio. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

My revision plan is to look through my previous ‘What is Content’ theory paper to get a good idea of what I knew when I wrote it, and then beginning my new paper. This will help me to see what progress I have made in my understanding of content. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

@lea_web I’m trying to do this by focusing on my purpose and ethos mainly in the introduction. Just giving a brief summary of the project then introducing myself and the concepts I’ll be presenting. Then I’ll go into depth with the project in the executive summary. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

@lea_web A suggestion for a graph could be to display any quantified data you have collected for Twitter and listing it that way. So like maybe if you notice trends in their retweets or likes, you can display them. You could keep some tweets though as additional visual aids! #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

@samrowless I included a graph with mine to show the data I collected. This helped me to cut down on my text and visualize what I was talking about. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

@AndrewBechtel My analysis looked at Facebook and their website, so I just included an overview of what LOHF was already achieving with their social media presence. Like how frequently they update things, their Spanish posts, and how they post helpful and personal videos. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I also need help with figuring out how to implement visuals and data graphs. What should I be showing examples of? #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help with finding out a good way to explain why people should read my guide. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

I need help with building my content analysis without seeming like I’m attacking the current employees of LOHF. #engl318mu

[Jade @BAIR_with_me]

My individual revision plan is to go through all my feedback and edit each point to be sure I don’t miss anything. Then I’ll go back through and make sure every element is cohesive with the whole project. #engl318mu