I hate when I read things that cast WWX as the maker of his own misery and suffering. The issues in MDZS Are deeply and obviously systemic And recasting them as really just a result of his personality flaws in the context of real world systemic injustice just feels so...
If there is a career ending injury in Unrivaled I think it should be Scott Hunter’s. That way you can have Shane seriously grapple with how his career could end unexpectedly and seriously think about life after hockey WITHOUT taking more away from him in the process.
percabeth’s grey streaks fading away never made sense to me because that’s supposed to be a reminder for your whole life, the burden may be off your shoulders physically but you never stopped carrying it