@jcbstwsk Iโd love to help ๐ I can give you honest, detailed feedback while keeping your storyโs voice intact. DM me before the offer ends! ๐โค๏ธ
@SObooknerd You got this, Being over halfway through two books is basically a promise at this point. Finish that book tonight!!
Every story has things its author canโt see alone. Iโd be happy to give your manuscript an honest readerโs perspective.
@User752954 Yeah, Iโm familiar with ATLA and Zutara ,but I totally get where youโre coming from. I wouldnโt want to use it for your fic or anything youโre specifically against.
@Ancientflower25 Your manuscript deserves a fresh pair of eyes. ๐๐ Iโd love to help you spot what works, what doesnโt, and what readers may miss.I'd be happy to tell you how I work. ๐
@BohemianSwarm Exactly! I think pacing is more about giving the reader room to process while still keeping the story moving. Cutting that chapter was probably the right call if it felt like catching up instead of progressing.
A story can have a great idea and still lose the reader.
Sometimes the problem isn't the plot.
It's the pacing. โณ
Too slow = boredom.
Too fast = confusion.
Good pacing keeps readers wanting to know what happens next. ๐โ๏ธ
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@fallenstarrysky Oh wow, three fandoms! ๐ That sounds like a fun project. 1โ2k words per fandom per day is definitely manageable. Iโd love to help with feedback as you go, especially grammar, flow, and anything that feels unnecessary or could use more development. ^^
@fallenstarrysky Absolutely! Thatโs exactly the kind of feedback I can help with. Iโll keep an eye out for grammar issues, awkward wording, unnecessary parts, and places where something could be added for better flow. Iโd be happy to take a look! :3 โค๏ธ
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@bymilliebramley Okay, โone nobody knows exists yetโ definitely got my attention ๐๐. Folklore woven into village life and a narrator who keeps her cards close to her chest sounds like exactly the kind of story Iโd want to discover before everyone else does. Iโd be interested in beta reading .
@HJames_Writes sounds like youโve got two exciting projects on the go ๐๐. And a fantasy romance thatโs heading toward beta reads definitely caught my attention ๐. Iโd love to hear more about both. What kind of feedback are you hoping to get from your beta readers when the time comes?