The way you communicate determines how people receive.
So if your words are weak…
Your results will be weaker.
Here’s the correction:
1. Say what you do. Clearly.
2. Say who it’s for. Directly.
3. Say the result. Boldly.
4. Say what to do next. Immediately.
@MrCharlesky Hi,
I am a professional designer with over 3 years of experience.I have helped businesses build trust and increase sales with my compelling designs. I can send in my portfolio and resume so you can have a clearer picture of the value I can bring.
@feedinkoo I am a professional designer with over 3 years of experience.I have helped businesses build trust and increase sales with my compelling designs. I can send in my portfolio and resume so you can have a clearer picture of the value I can bring.
@wiptheg@abDesigns154 I am a professional designer with over 3 years of experience.I have helped businesses build trust and increase sales with my compelling designs. I can send in my portfolio and resume so you can have a clearer picture of the value I can bring.
@_DeejustDee I am a professional designer with over 3 years of experience.I have helped businesses build trust and increase sales with my compelling designs. I can send in my portfolio and resume so you can have a clearer picture of the value I can bring.
@feedinkoo Hello
I am Marketing and social media designer and I have created compelling designs for business which has produced compelling results in terms of building trust and increasing sales.
I look forward to working with you
One of the many reasons why coaches struggles isn't because they lack knowledge.
They struggle because their brand doesn’t look like someone worth listening to yet.
It’s painful — knowing you can help people, but being ignored.
@creative__ui I will go with number one
Working with startups has helped boost my creative ideas. They managed my not too good designs as a beginner.
But as time progresses option two can bring some stability into your life