something i learned from presentations today is that research is a stressful process for everyone and that setting goals can help make it easier. #engl110mu#classnotesmu
PEER REVIEW: i edited my conclusion to try and extend the conversation more, but feel like it still isn’t exactly right. does anyone have any ideas? #engl110mu
PEER REVIEW: i was told i needed to edit my thesis to make it stronger. this is what i have so far but still feel like it could be stronger and maybe more concise, does anyone have any suggestions? thanks in advanced! #engl110mu
@VinciguerraElla This is what I am doing too! I want to focus on specifically preparing the elevator pitch. Good luck with your project and the essays! #engl110mu
@KileyTu23689460 I think your thesis sounds good, but I think you could be a little bit more specific leading up to. Don't go into too much detail yet but I think broadly introducing what you learned about writing, the process, etc. could help! #engl110mu
@ninasaengdara @katie_mu24 agreed! it's always good to aim higher, i think it will really show how far you've come and all that you've learned this semester! #engl110mu
My goal for drafting this week is to make sure both my essays are revised by Wednesday, and then use the rest of the week to finalize my zine. #engl110mu
My goal for revision is to make sure that both my essays and my zine show everything I have learned this semester and make the final products something that I can be proud of! #engl110mu
Something about my writing that has changed because of this course is who I write for. I honestly never really thought about my audience or discourse community before this course, and now it helps my writing so much! #engl110mu
@Kaitlyn65737540 I think it sounds good overall! I can see the direction your going in, although it might be stated a bit too generally if that makes sense. #engl110mu
@mfrusson This is exactly what my paper is on! The writing process is different for everyone, and people need to do what works for them to get the best results. #engl110mu
@KileyTu23689460 I think it sounds good and it isn't too vague! But I do think that the fourth sentence was a little bit awkward to read, so rewording that a little bit might help the paragraph read a little bit more clearly! #engl110mu