Dawn

for class,,,,

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

consume with love https://t.co/C1E4v2Yk6g #thethirdvoice

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 actually now im curious on what it would look like if if all the rain walk scenes had no dialouge, only the original audio #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 i like that we ended with the walk but i almost want there to be a while where theres no monolouge, only walking, maybe (maybe) with the sounds of the rain and footsteps too #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 after finishing the video i'm not sure if i like the scene with the rutgers campus, or the concert, both are not really brought up again and i dont think they add to the voice when looked at with the whole video? #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 the walking scene is very centering but i think the video could also do with more of the contrasting nature documentry esque bits, like the fox and the mountains #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 i think if there was more of the filter, it would make those parts pop even more #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 i like how the effects on the voice drop at 1:33 once were back inside - the third voice might have to do with ins and outs i think, with different sides of a situation or idea #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 the difference between the neighborhood at night and the bright woods is so jarring! and the audio of being afraid of whats in the drawer while were outside adds a lot of tension #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 i like how we come back to the same rain walk between scenes #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@BanksMjb633 immediately lots of different scenes, a concert, a walk in the rain at night and i think a college campus? are all really different and visually interesting #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 i also like the time stamps and the typing noises, it helps break up the day and move it along, plus the sound of the keys is so nice lol #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 i think i'd like to see more of the shells before and after the sink scene, since theres also a lot of beach imagery i was hoping for that to return? #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 i think the visual does such a good job at getting the story across that the audio's distruption doesnt really disrupt it so much as its adding to it #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 returning doggo <3 #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 love the way the water splashes sound and how the monolouge sounds underwater after it! espicially since it contradicts the way the scene would actually sound #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 i think the distant sounds of what seems like a cafe(?) add a lot of character because it sounds like a conversation you are overhearing at a busy cafe #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 the audio is really quiet tho, its a little hard to hear #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@Honeydewbings00 love the phone ringing intro! #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@iknooneaskedbut the sudden addition of effects to the repetitions added some tension which i really liked #smeno4review

[Dawn @Guwonlocked]

@iknooneaskedbut im not sure how i feel about the light switch, it def makes me pause but i didnt really get a chance to think more on it before the video continued #smeno4review