This whole story is like a fever dream but the way you write it formally is like a cherry on top, hahaha. Loved it.
The genre is quite thriller-ish and you wrapped it up nicely with hint of comedy. It's a yes from me, good luck on finding others' approval.
@scavelust I'm beyond grateful for your kind words. May your journey continue to be filled with joy and countless moments of fulfillment.
Sincerely,
Captain.