Hailey Atkinson

GSU 2025 // Criminal Justice Major

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The music and lighting create suspense #talkingfilm1101

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I’m concerned about not having enough examples#1101UnpacksProject2

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Will there be any examples so we have a little clearer explanation? #1101UnpacksProject2

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Making sure you stay on topic #1101PrepsProject2

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Organization will be very important #1101PrepsProject2

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Just turned in project 1 - kinda nervous lol

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@ayleen_guzmann @toriferra1 That works then I can do @toriferra1 and she can do yours?

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@toriferra1 @ayleen_guzmann have y’all decided who is gonna do who’s yet? I saw that neither of yours had a reply yet so I wasn’t sure

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@toriferra1 @ayleen_guzmann I was also wondering if the 2 sentences I added in the very beginning (the first 2 sentences) helped my paper or should be cut

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@toriferra1 @ayleen_guzmann one of my concerns is that I’m still debating on adding another character to help build but I’m not sure if that will make my paper too long

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@ayleen_guzmann do we do an edit for both partners or do we each take someone’s?

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@ayleen_guzmann do you have Tori F’s Twitter? She is in our group and I can’t find it

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Is it okay that my paper came out to 732 words? #1101checkin

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I have no clue what to change about my draft because I never got a peer edit the first time around @LocusWesley

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I’m kind of concerned I may need another character or two @LocusWesley

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#outlineyourthoughts1101

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@basko_kate I am having the same struggle of finding more characters as well, honestly I just searched my topic on google and it helped me find some, maybe that could get you a few as well?

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#1101DraftTwo I don’t think I got a peer edit and if I did I can’t find it so I’m not entirely sure what to change except for a few ideas I had on my own.

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#topiccheckin1101 My current topic is The villain who just wanted love.

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@jordanc945 I am also concerned on how to maybe add some quotes and citations because what I have now is just things I know and is general knowledge without any direct quotes