Me: I'm gonna rewrite the opening of "new book"
Wife: *reads it* I think it was better before
Me: *asks AI because what does she know*
Grok: your wife is right
ChatGPT: yeah she's right bro
This exact thing happened to me once at a residential job site. Turns out the guy had schizophrenia and was off his meds. A week later the cops arrested him for making verbal threats to a woman and her daughter.
🚨 TERRIFYING! Moment caught on a Ring camera shows a deranged man in a long coat crashing out asking “where is your daughter?” And threatened the man on the cam that he “will end him” if he doesn’t open the door
How would you handle this tense situation?
@Ash_The_Author 1) did you find the story *compelling*
2) were all the story lines resolved
3) did you think the characters were unique
4) what were your favorite and least favorite sections
5) did you ever find yourself skimming or skipping pages
6) is there anything you would add or cut
Took me 30-something thousand words, but I'm finally back in the "flow state" of writing on my new WIP.... and dag'gon does it feel good.
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@MsAnjaliB Volunteer at a local theater/library/gallery/charity, go to church, attend community events, take (hobby of your choice) classes... Any of the above things will introduce you to like-minded people who are also open to engaging in possible friendship.
Hard magic systems are more interesting in books. Soft magic systems are more interesting in film and TV. Come at me.
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