BLOODLIST THE 13TH: FRESH BLOOD IS HERE!!
Congrats to all who landed on the list this year, and to everyone who submitted! We were blown away by the quality & quantity of the submissions.
Have fun reading, & have a spooky, safe and fun Halloween! ๐๐ช
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BLOODLIST THE 13TH: FRESH BLOOD IS HERE!!
Congrats to all who landed on the list this year, and to everyone who submitted! We were blown away by the quality & quantity of the submissions.
Have fun reading, & have a spooky, safe and fun Halloween! ๐๐ช
https://t.co/nkO3ID4Xr7
๐งต 4 Writers and filmmakers: I was a development exec who greenlit 5 major motion pictures w stars like Ryan Reynolds and Penelope Cruz.
From my buyer POV here are 5 pitching mistakes ๐ซ + 4 hot tips โ to Stealth Pitch your project and get greenlit in the room.
#screenwriting
In a movie, the audience notices action first. Movement captures our eye, and then we process the meaning of that action.
We want to duplicate that in our screenwriting.
That means:
1. Describe the action. THEN.
2. The meaning of the action.
๐ฆ๐ผ, ๐ถ๐ป๐๐๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฑ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐:
๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฑ๐ข๐ช๐ฏ ๐ง๐ช๐ฏ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐บ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ต๐ด ๐ฉ๐ช๐ฎ, ๐๐บ ๐จ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ด ๐ด๐ช๐ญ๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต.
๐ง๐ฟ๐ ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ฒ๐๐ต๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐น๐ถ๐ธ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐:
๐๐บ ๐จ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ด ๐ด๐ช๐ญ๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต - ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฑ๐ข๐ช๐ฏ ๐ง๐ช๐ฏ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐บ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ต๐ต๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ฉ๐ช๐ฎ.
This small little thing helps with the feeling of watching a movie on screen rather than reading a narrative.
It's fair to ask what kind of difference could this possibly make. And it's true, one small thing makes very little difference.
But the small things add up over 100 pages, and it helps keep a reader immersed in the emotional experience.
Can all these small things save a bad story?
Nope. Not even close.
The goal is to always make a great story more easy to recognize.
OK, disclaimer and background:
Me -- screenwriter multiple years. TV writer/producer for six, wrote and directed 1st feature last year, indie financed by Image Nation (Late Night with the Devil), currently in post. Currently producing my 2nd feature.
This is JUST my opinion: