Number 3 is especially annoying. I call it the "in your head" syndrome--when the writer KNOWS that a character has a special power, for instance, but it only is revealed at a convenient time. I saw this is the kids I tutored in creative writing a lot, but also in adult fiction!
Here’s one mistake I see in almost every novel I edit: too much narrative distance, or space between the reader & the characters/events in the story.
Here are three ways you could be creating narrative distance & weakening your manuscript – without even realizing it (a 🧵):
Here's an idea for all those one-off character names that are so hard (for me) to come up with. Just name them after American cities. Boston! Chicago! Philly! Chillicothe!
Like any writer, I'm always searching for slang terms. These came about during WWI--some are quite surprising! 20 Slang Terms From World War I https://t.co/y90INEOyD6 via @Pocket
For whatever reason Amazon has lowered the price of my latest novel, True Courage. Regularly $16.99, now $13.08 (yeah, no idea what they want with that 8 cents). https://t.co/J5y0s4Qfeb
For whatever reason Amazon has lowered the price of my latest novel, True Courage. Regularly $16.99, now $13.08 (yeah, no idea what they want with that 8 cents). https://t.co/J5y0s4Qfeb
@behold_corn I read books to learn how to write, both fiction in my genre, other genres, and most helpfully, "how to write" books--lots and lots of them, gaining a bit of knowledge from each one.
Please please for the love of god: Don't use the term "brash American". It's a cliche. We are not all brash, I promise. Editors, put this on your cliche list to look for and stop your writers from using it.
I do not understand how people can be so gullible, except maybe when something seems to fit their ideology. Then the most idiotic thing can be true. People done lost their minds!
So some idiot on Amazon changed their review name to "Duke and Duchess of Sussex" and gave a 5 star review to Spare, while taking digs at Harry and Meghan. Then some idiot in ALLi's Facebook group wanted to know how they could review their own book. 😭