I'm back I guess. I don't have a set posting schedule right now but I've been posting new pages on the website if you're interested.
https://t.co/vs7sF2vhL9
Someone at work read Luck Labs. He had some very valid and insightful feedback. I think I need to make chapter 0 to spice shit up more in the early chapters. Just like 12 pages.
In addition to that I'm thinking of making a little canon side-story about Will and Price's group because they're not going to be relevant again until Almadaan ends. That might be like 50 pages long.
What I find interesting about the first 5 Pixar movies is each one was essentially a tech demo for computer graphics at the time.
Toy Story was to show you could even make a computer animated movie
A Bugs Life was to show you could have hundreds of individual models on screen
Monsters Inc. Was to showcase fur and hair physics
Finding Nemo was to showcase underwater effects and motion.