' You have completely
understood the vision !! '
ใ A clasp of her hands,
nodding . Metalstorm was
stressful, but it was easier
to deal with when people
actually saw her vision .
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' I have this whole*
thing planned in the third
act, where we will turn
your character into a
sympathetic character
that the audience roots
for .
Right before* we reveal your
character as being the inside
leak that Space Cowboy
has
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to the fullest . Make the
audience question your
viablity as a character before
we make the reveal that
you are so* much more,
if that makes sense ? '
ใ Great . More questions,
just what she needed โ
a crease of her eyebrows
as she looked at him then
to the page . ใ
' Mh . Stoic, mysterious,
quiet . Very . . . low tonal
and a matter of short
syllables versus words .
If that makes sense ? '
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ใ Reading over the script,
nodding some . ใ
' You are supposed to be
this sort of . . . enigma .
Starting out as this character
that seems unimportant but
is actually a crucial piece
to Space Cowboy's entire
character arc .
Here, I want to enhance that
enigma
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