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日英 translation, melody transcription, flute covers, drawing. まどほむ、bloom in燈侑、雨夜の月、わたたべ、ガルクラ、きみは終末。

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translation of fan event reports, analyses, etc.
critique of the English version
and various other things

ファンイベントレポート、考察などの翻訳
英語版の批評
と他のさまざまなもの

#BloomIntoYou
#やがて君になる
https://t.co/8kNRdSC52h

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The title of this episode is 「記述問題」 which the official translation has as "Essay Question". A person doesn't choose things in an essay.
Also, in a later scene properly translated that Yuu is to "decide" on a prize.

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7⃣ I guess choosing a reward is actually pretty tough, then!
🆚 In that case, it's actually difficult to decide on the prize.

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Similiar change as earlier. The official translation mixes up the usage of "choosing" and "deciding".
https://t.co/XkXeHDqH1f
"Choosing" a reward implies that Yuu is presented with a selection to choose from.

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7⃣ I've never been good at making up my mind.
The Person I Love
🆚 I've always been bad at choosing.
The One Whom I Love

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The official translation changes Touko's amazement into self-beration.

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7⃣ I see. You have a point...
why didn't I see it before?!

🆚 Oh, is that how it is...
I see... that's amazing...!?

Alternative for the second line:
I see... oh wow...!?

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そっか　そうなのか…
なるほど……すごいね…！？
（8巻75頁）

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The official translation changes Yuu's musing into a question, which loses the parallel with her repeating the near-exact same line later in the episode.

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7⃣ A prize... what would I want Senpai to do...?
🆚 A prize... something I want Senpai to do, huh...

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賞品……　先輩にしてほしいことかぁ
（8巻72頁）

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The official translation removed the aspect that this yatsuhashi is the raw variant. Also, they changed Sayaka's tone of voice.

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7⃣ Simple is best! We should get cinnamon.
yatsuhashi
🆚 For raw yatsuhashi, we should go with plain cinnamon, right?
raw yatsuhashi

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生八ッ橋ならプレーンなニッキ味でしょう
生八ッ橋
（8巻67頁）

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The official translation removed the part about Yuu considering living together as likely to happen.

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7⃣ It's way too early to think about living together and stuff like that, obviously.
🆚 Even if we'll possibly live together and such, it's still a long way off.

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一緒に暮らすとかそんなのはありえるとしても全然先の話だし
（8巻57頁）

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← the correct line that Maki should reference
→ the incorrect line that the official translation references

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7⃣ But yesterday you said you don't really care anymore.
🆚 But yesterday you said I don't need to worry about it.

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The official translation quoted the wrong line from episode 39, which results in Maki taking Yuu's words out of context.