Eleanor returns to her familyâs decaying estate, Thornrose Manor, to uncover a secret buried in its history, but the house holds more than dust and silence...
Set for Release November 2025
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Five stories. Five dangers. Five doors stand openâdread, desire, secrets, shadows, whispers. Only one will be written. Your choice decides which story comes alive.
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The Lantern of Waldsee Part VI: Through the Glass
The mirror hadnât fogged. Not yet. But Clara could feel it waiting. The flat was hushed in a way that didnât feel silent. Like the walls themselves listened. Even the lanternâusually flickering just enough to offer companyâburned too still tonight.
It pulsed once. Then again. She whispered her name.
Nothing moved. She whispered it backward. Aralc. The glass exhaled.
She remained stillâcaught between flame and reflection, fingers curled around the spine of her journal. She hadnât truly slept in days. And she hadnât dreamed either. Just fragments: the spiral stitched into soft earth, Leni bathing her hands in ash water, the cellar door widening in a slow breath.
The velvet box pulsed. She didnât touch it. But she heard it remembering. Below, the cellar thudded at 3:03 a.m.
Not loud. Just enough. She didnât check. Wallpaper had curled overnight. Peeling in the shape of spirals. The lantern ticked faintlyâa rhythmic sound like counting, but too slow to be time.
She whispered again. And the mirror bloomed. Her flat turned wrong. The door swung the opposite way. No radiator. Spiral grains unfurled across the floorboards. Furniture stretchedâsame design, different scale. Even the velvet box was wrong: wider, deeper, breathing faint warmth.
Her journal sat on the desk. She opened it. Blank. Every page pristine. Thenâbeneath the bindingâsomething new. A folded slip of paper tucked as if forgotten.
Leniâs handwriting: If you stand inside long enough, the flame will no longer recognize you. You must decide if that matters.
The note smelled faintly of wax and pine. She slid it into her coat pocket. The mirror pulsed. Her reflection smiled. But the smile didnât reach the eyes.
Outside, Waldsee had emptied. No wind. No footsteps. No birds. But every lantern burned blue.
Shops locked. Curtains drawn. Symbols etched across glassâcharcoal spirals trembling in the frost. Clara walked through fog not guided but pulled, her boots carrying her toward the forest like sheâd done this before.
She passed a window. Inside sat a sepia photograph. A young girl with a lantern. She wasnât smiling.
Beneath, red ink:
Clara Reiter â Returned.
The bakery looked older. Cracked. Its door sealed by salt. She remembered the bakerâs warning: She listens through flame.
Now, the door bore something new. A carving. A woman without a face. A lantern etched into her chest, flame curling outward.
The fog pressed harder. It wrapped itself around Claraâs wrists, tightened across her throat. Not chokingâjust holding.
She passed the fountain. Its water ran thick and dark. Names carved into the rim.
Leniâs.
Her own.
Another left blank.
The trees bent as if theyâd grown toward her deliberately. The runes across bark pulsed gently with breath. The ground sagged, and when she kneltâsoil welcomed her.
Warm. Wet. Fresh.
A ribbon lay half-buried beneath moss. Familiar. Fraying.
She touched it. Tied it to her wrist. It burned. Then quieted. She didnât cry.
She stepped deeper. The clearing opened like an inhale. A shrine. Half built from bone, half from root. Broken lanterns formed a circle.
A hollowed tree in the center glowed faint blue. Carvings curled along its baseâfaces screaming without mouths. Someone knelt inside. Clara stopped.
The voice was soft. Cracked. Singing.
Leni. But younger. Or timeless.
The lullaby returnedânot reversed this time. Full. Heavy. Resigned.
Clara stepped into the circle.
Leni turned. Eyes clouded. No recognition. âClara?â she asked.
âIâm here.â
Leni frowned. âMine didnât answer the mirror. She stayed whole.â
âI didnât.â
Leni brushed Claraâs cheek with fingers that felt like riverstones. âYou were not born here,â she whispered, âbut you were made here.â
Then she vanished.
Silence gathered around Claraâs boots. The shrine went still. The mirror fogged behind her. A figure pressed forward. No footsteps. No breath. Its shape shifted: Clara. Then Leni. Then Möser. Then no one.
The voice arrived layered. Wrong. Familiar. âWe are memory.â âWe are flame.â âWe are what flickers.â âYou are the final echo.â
Clara stood. Her shadow stayed. âWhat happens if I say yes?â
âYou will carry their names. Their wounds. Their forgetting. You will never be free.â
âAnd if I say no?â
âYou will forget. But the forgetting will not be yours. You will mirror. But you will not be Clara.â
Her lantern pulsed. The velvet box split wider. Inside, the spiral leaf curled inward. Black veins throbbed. The journal trembled.
Clara wrote. Not as herself. As every echo. I saw myself disappear. I watched myself smile. But I did not smile. She offered peace. But peace is not what binds us.
I will carry the weight.
The mirror cracked once. Quiet. Final. Her shadow curled around her feet. It moved for her. Not with her. It pulled toward the lantern. Then into it.
A flicker. Then silence. She woke in her flat. The mirror was gone. The cellar sealed. The journal full.
The velvet box glowed from within. The lantern now burned inside it.
Outside, the fog pressed tight against the windows. Watching. She didnât write again. But she whispered. Every night.
The wallpaper never stopped peeling. Her breath never fully warmed the room. The cellar thudded sometimes. But not at 3:03 anymore.
It waited for something else.
Her final page bore no date.
Only a truth.
The flame only forgets when we ask it to. But the mirror remembers everything. My name is Clara Reiter. I did not walk away. I burned. And I stayed.
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The Lantern of Waldsee Chapter V: Reflections & Deals
The lantern wouldnât light.
Clara struck the match three times. The wick remained dry. Cold. Like it had forgotten its purpose. Or refused it.
She stepped back from the desk, watching the shadows wrinkle on the walls as morning tried to arrive. Outside, the fog had thickened, colorless and heavy. She couldnât see the bakeryâs rooftop anymore.
She turned to the mirror. It showed her desk, the velvet box, the unlit lantern. But the angle was wrongâslightly elevated. Tilted, like someone watched from just above the room, unseen.
The box pulsed once. She didnât dare touch it.
The cellar thumped at dawn. No urgencyâjust enough to make her pulse stutter. Like someone had dropped a stone. Or something had shifted beneath the wood.
She wrapped herself in her coat and stood at the top of the cellar stairs for a long while. Nothing came again. Not yet.
The journal lay open when she returned to the desk. The previous dayâs entry was untouchedâbut a second one, dated ahead, filled the opposite page.
âI saw myself leave. But I stayed.â âSheâll offer forgetting. Rewriting. Releasing. But the flame flickers first.â The ink smelled like scorched pine and old rain. The signature below read: Aralc Clara â Waldsee, 1974
Her breath caught in her throat. She hadnât written this. She hadnât even thought it.
The reflection in the mirror blinked slowly.  Then it smiledâsoft and sad. Clara stepped toward the glass, her breath fogging the lower corners. Her hand hovered just shy of touching. The flame-less lantern behind her cast no light, but the mirrorâs edges glowed faintly.
The reflection mouthed her name. But the voice arrived in her thoughts, not her ears. A lullaby threaded itself through her mind again. Familiar now, but different. This time, there were words.
âWho walks without shadow walks too far.â âWho speaks their name watches it leave.â âWhat flame cannot touch, the forest eats.â The tune vibrated inside herâlike it belonged to her bones. She closed her eyes.
And Leni returned.
Flashback â Leniâs Last Warning
Clara had been sixteen. The hospice smelled of antiseptic and lavender oil, clashing in the air.
Leni lay tucked beneath knit blankets, her hand trembling as Clara poured water into a cup. Sheâd asked about Waldsee earlier that week. Her mother had been evasive. Protective.
But Leni, blurred by morphine and fading time, had whispered:Â âNever say âyesâ to a reflection. It doesnât mean the same thing on the other side.â
Clara frowned. âIs this one of your stories?â
Leniâs eyes flickered open, then rolled toward the ceiling. âThe Guests came for me. Once. During the Hollow Solstice. I burned my name to stay.â
Her fingers reached for Claraâs wrist, weak but certain. âIf your shadow leaves you behind⊠donât chase it. Itâs already made its choice.â
Clara had dismissed it. But now, standing between mirror and lantern, she knew Leni hadnât been rambling. She had been remembering. She whispered her name. The reflection paused. Then, with eerie precision, the Mirror Guest repeated it backânot aloud, but inside Claraâs thoughts.
Clara tried to move. Her own shadow twisted near her feetâdelayed, uncertain. Then it slithered up the wall behind the mirror frame.
Reflected. Not obeying. The Bargain. There was no voice. No form. Only feeling. Thought. Pressure against her name itself. To forget the weight of memory. To silence the questions. To live unchased by flicker and fog.
She could untether herself. Escape Waldseeâs grip... But the price wasnât blood. It was her reflection.
Her name, reversed. Her âotherâ would walk. In exchange, Clara would be left alone.
Forget Leni. Forget the velvet box. Forget the journal entries she hadnât written.
No more Guests.
No more mirrors.
No more flicker.
She backed away, trembling.
The velvet box warmed again.
When she touched it, a second pulse echoed through the mirror glass. Her shadow writhed once, and behind the fog, the reflection leaned closer.
Smiling. Longing.
Not malicious. Not kind. Just present.
She grabbed the journal and flipped pages desperately. Some were blank. Others were filled with entries she didnât remember.
One scrawled note, pressed faintly into the corner: âTo see yourself go⊠let the forest light your name.â
Another, in a different hand: L.R. â Hollow Solstice, 1914
She gasped.
Leni.
This handwriting was older. More cursive. And the name repeated across multiple pages.
Leni Reiter.
But some entries had the name scratched out. Beneath it, only: Gast.
She couldnât breathe. The lantern lit on its own. A long, slow burn.
Then a second lantern pulsed beside it.
Clara turned.
It had appeared beside the cellar door. One she hadnât placed. One she hadnât seen. Smoke curled from the journal nowâthin and white.
Pages fluttered. And the final note glowed across the edge of her desk...
"If she writes again, it wonât be me."
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The Lantern of Waldsee Part IV: The Forest Beckons
Clara hadnât slept.
The hours between midnight and dawn felt wrongâstretched too thin, too quiet. Her journalâleft shut beside the bedâwas open again. A new entry curved across the page in her own handwriting:
âSheâs listening even when I forget.â
The ink smelled of scorched pine. Her breath caught.
She wandered the flat with cold feet and colder thoughts. The cellar door rattled once, though it had always been sealed. When she crouched to check the latch, she found a childâs drawing slipped underneath the frame.
Two stick figures: one tall, one small. Both lacked eyes. Beneath them, a spiral and the word Clara. The lines were done in charcoal.
Wallpaper had peeled above the radiator overnightârevealing faint spirals traced into the wood, patterns nearly identical to the velvet box tucked beneath her desk.
Behind the radiator, she found the note. âDonât mirror the flame.â
It was brittle and yellowed, burned at the corners. She held it until her fingers trembled.
She lit the lantern and sat cross-legged between it and the mirror. A ritual? Or something older?
She whispered her name.
Her reflection blinked first. Then it smiled. Then it whispered her name in return, lips curling around it like a secret Clara hadnât earned.
The flame flickered once.
The cellar thumped.
Morning twisted itself into something colder.
Clara fled to the town square for distraction. Lanterns leaned where they hadnât before, and fresh spirals had been etched into the fountainâs base. Not chalk. Scratchedâdeep.
The bakery was open. The baker handed her bread without greeting. She recalled how, two days ago, heâd hummed warmly, flour dusting his sleeves. Now he wouldnât meet her eyes. His hands shook.
âYou look pale,â she said.
He flinched. âYou saw her, didnât you?â
âWho?â
His voice dropped to a whisper. âShe listens through mirrors. Only flame keeps her quiet.â
Clara stepped back.
He turned away, humming low and brokenâmatching the rhythm of that reversed lullaby sheâd heard near the woods.
The bookshopâs window was dust-slicked. Clara paused, heart thudding. A leather-bound tome faced outward: Legenden des Schwarzwalds. (Legends of the Black Forest) Its pages curled in the cold. A chapter title read: âDie Flackernden GĂ€steâ â The Flickering Guests.
Her own name was etched faintly in the margin beside the chapter heading. Beneath it, a date: Solstice â93. She hadnât been born until the fall.
Back in her flat, she opened the velvet box. The lining lifted easily nowâlike it had been waiting.
Beneath it, a pressed leaf rested inside a shallow compartment. Black-veined. Fragrant. A spiral etched across its surface matched the carvings Clara had seen at the forestâs edge.
When she touched it, memory pulsed in her spine:
She was six again, climbing onto her great-grandmother Leniâs lap during one of those quiet afternoons when storms coiled through the trees. Leni hummed softly into a mirrorâwooden-framed, black spiral grain like the velvet box.
Clara thought she was singing to herself until she heard her whisper: âDer Spiegelgast hasnât found their way back yet.â
âWhoâs that?â Clara asked.
Leni smiled gently. âSomeone who follows the names.â
Leni tied a ribbon around the mirrorâs edge. It vanished seconds later. Clara remembered hiding behind a wicker chair to watch. Leni never noticed. She remembered the way the mirror fogged, though no warmth touched it.
She blinked back to the present. The mirror in her flat fogged gently. And Claraâs reflection began to moveâbefore she did.
She ran.
The forest waited.
Not with invitationâbut with intention
.
Fog draped across the path like silk left out to rot. Lanterns glowed faintly along forgotten routes. Symbols carved into trees pulsed as she passedâsome bright, some bleeding. The footsteps behind her didnât match her own.
They mirrored. Then lagged. Then stopped.
She turned. Nothing.
But a root curled beside her bootâtwisting toward her toes. She tripped on buried glass: shards arranged in a spiral beneath a collapsed tree. Each shard bore a faint reflection. Not hers. One showed a hand. Another, a face smiling with no mouth.
Bark beneath her palm felt warm. It pulsed once. From the hollow of a nearby trunk came soft breathing. It matched hers. But exhaled slower.
She reached the clearing as twilight fell heavy. The shrine stood crooked and ancientâits hollowed core filled with offerings: bone carvings, rusted trinkets, childrenâs shoes crusted with soil. Lanterns lay shattered nearby, but one flickered faintly.
She knelt instinctively. The bark beneath her knees gave slightly. Pinned into the bark was a page from her journal.
Day One.
Edges burned. Her name circled.
Her fingers shook.
Beside the altar sat a figure carved from wax and boneâwrapped in a thread-thin necklace Clara remembered from childhood. Leni had given it to her. It had vanished years ago.
She reached toward the stone lantern set into the roots.
Inside, a mirror. It didnât reflect the forest. It reflected her flat. The desk. The journal. The cellar.
The door in the reflection was open. And something stood at the bottom of the stairs.
Not Clara. Watching.
Her name echoed faintly from inside the shrineâlike it had been whispered through soil.
She turned. The fog had stopped curling. Now, it crouched.
And at the edge of the clearing, Frau Möser stood... Smiling.
Her shadow stretched in two directions. One toward Clara. One away. Beside her, a flickering shape coalesced. Its face didnât hold. Its hands bled mirrorglass. And its smile matched Claraâs reflection.
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**note: This is an older work under my old writing style**
Taro, so many things could be said about him and yet nothing could also be said. The young man was born and raised in Japan for much of his youth. He was an excellent student, he kept out of trouble, and was always trying to make his family proud. Like most boys, he had hobbies, likes, and dislikes.
You see Taro had always been close to his family and as the only child of his parents he was often the center of their attention, but he also had much expected of him. He loved his life there, and he loved his friends, things couldn't have been better for him. Or at least that is what could be said until the day when his childhood was forever changed.
In a single moment, all that he knew had been shattered into pieces so small that they would never fit together again. The dark-haired young man's life was changed by the death of his parents. He had become distraught and depressed, torn by the grief which consumed his heart. With no family left Taro had been sent to live with a relative in America.
At first, things were awkward for him. So much to get used to, it had taken time. He made new friends, the death of his parents moved to the back of his mind. Taro managed to get back on track so that he was able to finish junior high school. Taro had worked hard, his effort rewarded when he not only got into an excellent senior high school but by how accepting the Field and Track team was of him.
For the most part, he had always been an average student he got pretty decent grades, but most of all and much to his homeroom teachers dismay he was a distraction to the girls.
Taro was fit and athletic, his short brown hair had gotten a bit longer and a bit shaggy making the young man look like he belonged in a band. Unlike what many thought his eyes were unlike the typical Japanese person's, his were hazel laced with green instead of brown. He worked hard not so as not to shame the relatives that had so generously taken him into their home. What started out as the darkest time of his life, had changed into something better. However now it seemed every night for the last few weeks his dreams were constantly being troubled by a dream he had as a small child.
~Dream~
Taroâs dream had been the same each night, he was an adolescent child playing out in the small yard which covered the space in front of his home. He was lonely that day as all of his friends had to spend time with their families and while he understood, he also hated it. Taro's mother was always traveling with her work leaving him in the hands of a babysitter who didn't pay any attention to him and this angered the small boy so much, he kicked his ball so hard it flew over the small fence and away from him.
Taro was always so lonely and sad. He became angry, angry that his friends got to spend time with their families and he was unable to spend time with his mom. Taro nearly missed the tiny voice coming from the other side of the gate, "Is this yours?"
He blinked then climbed the gate and looked over before nearly falling off the fence in surprise. There on the other side was a boy who looked so much like himself he couldn't help but stare in awe only being broken from this as the small voice spoke again making it clear that Japanese was not the child's first language., " I-is this yours?"
The smaller boy looked back at the slightly older youth on the fence not sure what to think of the fact that the kid could have passed for his brother and perhaps even his twin. The kid didn't let it bother him, smiling almost shyly the child held out the ball that Taro had all but admittedly kicked over the fence in his anger. The smaller boy tossed it up toward Taro but he wasn't strong enough to make. For a moment a sad and embarrassed look spread across his face making him look down, " S-sorry... let me try that again."
Taro nearly smiled as the other boy tried to give him back the ball but failed in the attempt, however, he lost the smile at the look which crossed his new friends' features. Climbing down Taro opened the gate, he walked out just as the boy was about to try and toss the ball back over the fence, "Thanks⊠for bringing it back."
"I'm Xanther, who are you?" He asked holding the ball out for the older boy who took it and threw it back in his yard. Taro was still staring at Xanther his manners shot all to hell. Far as he knew he didn't have a brother because his mother would have told him, instead, he offered his name. "I'm Taro, wanna play?"
Xanther started to nod but stopped as he heard his grandfather calling for him. For a moment he looked crestfallen Xanther had been so bored and finally when he found someone to play with he had to go, "I can't, I'm sorryâŠ"
Taro sighed as he nodded his understanding hoping Xanther would come back to play later, but he never did. Life went on and things changed the young boy, Xanther, eventually forgotten pushed to the back of Taroâs mind.
~Dreams End~
It was early and dawn had approached. The sun started to rise in the distance, Taro was still in a twilight, the existence between being awake and deep slumber. The house was silent in this moment of quiet before the world awoke and life got busy, Taro was about to join them as the first rays of the sun that peaked over the trees lighting the world with a gentle light.
Warm, bright sunbeams slipped through the window and curtains casting the light across Taroâs face making his bronzed skin glow. This last for only a moment as a soft groan could be heard in protest to having been woken early, his alarm hadn't even gone off yet but it was too late to go back to sleep now. "Uhh sun... too bright," he muttered as he got up and gathered his things to take a shower and ready himself for the first day of the new school year.
After cleaning up he went down to find his aunt had left him breakfast and a note. The note was letting him know that she had to go to work early and that she would be home late. Taro knew the older woman cared for him but it still wasn't the same he missed his mother, his life now had to due. It could be worse⊠at least things there were quietâŠ
His aunt was his mother's sister and she had come to America while she was in college. Sighing softly he dug into the traditional Japanese breakfast of okayu, natto, and tamagoyaki; he was grateful that school had started back up and his lonely break was over. The high school sophomore cleaned up after himself, something his aunt had always taught and enforced, giving one last look he locked up and headed for school. Taking the route he had memorized over the break, Taro found it only slightly strange that it took him right by Xanther's house. He and Taro were friends but he hesitated a moment before passing by not up to company right then due to the strange dream. Usually, the dream faded fast but today it lingered at the back of his mind almost frustrating him and at the same time as if saying that it had some importance.
'It's just a dreamâŠ' He told himself kicking a rock off the sidewalk as he turned the corner of the street and saw the school a couple of block up the way. The teen stopped at the gate and took a deep breath of the crisp morning air, filling his lungs in a refreshing way before he let it out and entered the school, he got his locker set up and headed for the small outdoor lunch area as he wanted to relax before things got busy.
He hadn't realized he had fallen asleep until he felt a hand on his shoulder shaking him and a familiar voice calling his name. He slowly opened his eyes wincing as the sun's light nearly blinded him anyone that looked at him could tell he was still out of it, and his eyes were unfocused, "Xan?"
Taro, so many things could be said about him and yet nothing could also be said. The young man was born and raised in Japan for much of his youth and into his teens. He was an excellent student, he kept out of trouble, and was always trying to make his family proud. Like most boys, he had hobbies, likes, and dislikes.
You see Taro had always been close to his family and as the only child of his parents he was often the center of their attention, but he also had much expected of him. He loved his life there, and he loved his friends, things couldn't have been better for him. Or at least that is what could be said until the day when his childhood was forever changed.
In a single moment, all that he knew had been shattered into pieces so small that they would never fit together again. The dark-haired young man's life was changed by the death of his mother. He had become distraught and depressed, his father was torn by the grief which consumed his heart and so Taro had been sent to live with a relative in America.
At first, things were awkward for him. So much to get used to, it had taken time. He made new friends, the death of his mother moved to the back of his mind. Taro managed to get back on track so that he was able to finish junior high school. Taro had worked hard, his effort rewarded when he not only got into an excellent senior high school but by how accepting the Field and Track team was of him.
For the most part, he had always been an average student he got pretty decent grades, but most of all and much to his homeroom teachers dismay he was a distraction to the girls.
Taro was fit and athletic, his short brown hair had gotten a bit longer and a bit shaggy making the young man look like he belonged in a band. Unlike what many thought his eyes were unlike the typical Japanese person's, his were hazel laced with green instead of brown. He worked hard not so as not to shame the relatives that had so generously taken him into their home. What started out as the darkest time of his life, had changed into something better. However now it seemed every night for the last few weeks his dreams were constantly being troubled by a dream he had as a small child.
~Dream~
Taroâs dream had been the same each night, he was an adolescent child playing out in the small yard which covered the space in front of his home. He was lonely that day as all of his friends had to spend time with their families and while he understood, he also hated it. Taro's mother was always traveling with her work leaving him in the hands of a babysitter who didn't pay any attention to him and this angered the small boy so much, he kicked his ball so hard it flew over the small fence and away from him.
Taro was always so lonely and sad. He became angry, angry that his friends got to spend time with their families and he was unable to spend time with his mom. Taro nearly missed the tiny voice coming from the other side of the gate, "Is this yours?"
He blinked then climbed the gate and looked over before nearly falling off the fence in surprise. There on the other side was a boy who looked so much like himself he couldn't help but stare in awe only being broken from this as the small voice spoke again making it clear that Japanese was not the child's first language., " I-is this yours?"
The smaller boy looked back at the slightly older youth on the fence not sure what to think of the fact that the kid could have passed for his brother and perhaps even his twin. The kid didn't let it bother him, smiling almost shyly the child held out the ball that Taro had all but admittedly kicked over the fence in his anger. The smaller boy tossed it up toward Taro but he wasn't strong enough to make. For a moment a sad and embarrassed look spread across his face making him look down, " S-sorry... let me try that again."
Taro nearly smiled as the other boy tried to give him back the ball but failed in the attempt, however, he lost the smile at the look which crossed his new friends' features. Climbing down Taro opened the gate, he walked out just as the boy was about to try and toss the ball back over the fence, "Thanks⊠for bringing it back."
"I'm Xanther, who are you?" He asked holding the ball out for the older boy who took it and threw it back in his yard. Taro was still staring at Xanther his manners shot all to hell. Far as he knew he didn't have a brother because his mother would have told him, instead, he offered his name. "I'm Taro, wanna play?"
Xanther started to nod but stopped as he heard his grandfather calling for him. For a moment he looked crestfallen Xanther had been so bored and finally when he found someone to play with he had to go, "I can't, I'm sorryâŠ"
Taro sighed as he nodded his understanding hoping Xanther would come back to play later, but he never did. Life went on and things changed the young boy, Xanther, eventually forgotten pushed to the back of Taroâs mind.
~Dreams End~
It was early and dawn had approached. The sun started to rise in the distance, Taro was still in a twilight, the existence between being awake and deep slumber. The house was silent in this moment of quiet before the world awoke and life got busy, Taro was about to join them as the first rays of the sun that peaked over the trees lighting the world with a gentle light.
Warm, bright sunbeams slipped through the window and curtains casting the light across Taroâs face making his bronzed skin glow. This last for only a moment as a soft groan could be heard in protest to having been woken early, his alarm hadn't even gone off yet but it was too late to go back to sleep now. "Uhh sun... too bright," he muttered as he got up and gathered his things to take a shower and ready himself for the first day of the new school year.
After cleaning up he went down to find his aunt had left him breakfast and a note. The note was letting him know that she had to go to work early and that she would be home late. Taro knew the older woman cared for him but it still wasn't the same he missed his mother, his life now had to due. It could be worse⊠at least things there were quietâŠ
His aunt was his mother's sister and she had come to America while she was in college. Sighing softly he dug into the traditional Japanese breakfast of okayu, natto, and tamagoyaki; he was grateful that school had started back up and his lonely break was over. The high school sophomore cleaned up after himself, something his aunt had always taught and enforced, giving one last look he locked up and headed for school. Taking the route he had memorized over the break, Taro found it only slightly strange that it took him right by Xanther's house. He and Taro were friends but he hesitated a moment before passing by not up to company right then due to the strange dream. Usually, the dream faded fast but today it lingered at the back of his mind almost frustrating him and at the same time as if saying that it had some importance.
'It's just a dreamâŠ' He told himself kicking a rock off the sidewalk as he turned the corner of the street and saw the school a couple of block up the way. The teen stopped at the gate and took a deep breath of the crisp morning air, filling his lungs in a refreshing way before he let it out and entered the school, he got his locker set up and headed for the small outdoor lunch area as he wanted to relax before things got busy.
He hadn't realized he had fallen asleep until he felt a hand on his shoulder shaking him and a familiar voice calling his name. He slowly opened his eyes wincing as the sun's light nearly blinded him anyone that looked at him could tell he was still out of it, and his eyes were unfocused, "Xan?â
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The Lantern of Waldsee Chapter III: The First Vanishing
Clara woke gasping. Her eyes darted across the roomâwindow, mirror, lantern. All still.
But the air was heavier than it had ever been in the flat. Thick with damp, memory, and something else: a tension she couldnât locate but felt pressing against her skin.
She hadnât dreamt. That was the problem. Instead, sheâd felt like she remembered. Something that didnât belong to her.
She stood slowly, arms wrapped around herself for warmth she couldnât generate. The fog outside hadn't lifted in days, and now it clung to the windows like frostbite. She moved toward her desk and stared at the velvet box. Still shut. Still faintly warm to the touch.
Her shadow on the wall didnât follow.
It laggedâhalf a breath behind, then too fast. She turned. It caught up, but for a moment it bent in a way her body hadnât.
Her breath caught.
A glass rolled off the counter behind her.
But she hadnât moved.
Outside, the lanterns glowed faintlyâthough one house stood dark.
Clara hadn't noticed before. It was subtle, wedged between two steep-roofed homes. Its shutters were drawn and the salt bundles on the stoop looked untouched. The air around it felt flatânot just still, but erased.
She blinked, gripping the journal in her coat pocket.
Had the lantern burned yesterday?
At the bakery, the usual chatter had shriveled to stammered greetings and fractured sentences. The baker didnât meet her eyes. Just slid a roll across the counter and murmured:
âFog came earlyâŠâ âThe Hollow Solstice feeds more this yearâŠâ âHe didnât light itâŠâ
Clara froze.
âWhoâ
But he turned, face pale, and retreated behind the oven.
She stepped out and scribbled his words in her journal with shaking fingers.
Journal Entry â Waldsee, Day 3
He didnât light it. And now the house is dark. The villagers wonât name him, wonât speak of him.
I saw his smile yesterday. I swear I did. He nodded at me from his steps.
Today, there are symbols carved into his door and soot circles on his windowsill.
I think they mark those who fail the flame.
She paced the edge of the village square, unable to sit still. Her feet led her toward the woodsânot quite inside, but close enough for the tree line to bend oddly. She found a small toy dropped near the base of a spiral-carved tree. A carved wooden bear, polished by hand. The wood matched her velvet box.
She pocketed it.
A soft hum drifted from the treesânot melody, but pattern. It sounded familiar.
A lullaby.
Her grandmother used to sing it⊠only now, the notes ran backward.
Clara froze.
The box at her side warmed instantly.
Her breath trembled. She knew that tune.
But she didnât remember why.
That night, sleep resisted but memory did not.
Memory Dream â Age 4
Clara is small again, tucked into her great-grandmother Leniâs lap in the upstairs room with the attic window. Rain pings softly against the glass. Leni brushes Claraâs hair slowly with a carved comb that smells faintly of ash and pine.
âYour name belongs to the trees now,â Leni says softly.
Clara giggles. âTrees canât own names.â
Leni humsânot words, just syllables. Foreign and lilting. Clara leans into the sound.
âOne day,â Leni whispers, âtheyâll call it back.â
Clara blinks. âWho?â
Leni doesnât answer. She just hands Clara a small trinketâa disc of carved wood strung on a fraying black thread. Spiral etched deep.
âYouâll wear this when the fog returns.â
âI donât like fog.â
âYou will.â
Clara tries to remember what happened to the disc. She thinks she hid it in a toy box. Maybe she lost it in the move. Maybe she buried it.
She woke gasping.
The tune still hummed beneath her thoughts.
Back in Waldsee, Clara wandered to the lanternless house.
The front door was cracked.
Inside smelled of dried herbs and cold soot. The furniture sat untouched. No signs of struggle. Only ritual: black salt lines. Bundles of twine arranged in circles. A second velvet box on the mantleâidentical to hers.
Beside it, a photo.
A boyâmaybe eightâholding a lantern. But his shadow didnât touch the ground. It curled upward, like smoke.
Clara felt sick.
In the fireplace grate, wrapped in waxed cloth, was a journal.
The spiral marked its cover.
Pages inside bled faint ink and desperate script:
âDer Spiegelgast kommt bei Nebel.â (The Mirror Guest arrives with fog.)
âIch habe meinen Namen vergessen.â (I forgot my name.)
âMeine Mutter sagte, ich war nicht geboren. Ich war geholt.â (My mother said I wasnât born. I was fetched.)
One entry listed names. Clara skimmed them. Her eyes stopped halfway.
Her name. Not dated. No context. She shut the journal, heart racing.
At her desk, she compared the rune from that book with the parchment inside her velvet box. They matched.
She pressed the rune again. This time, the mirror cracked slightly. Then healed.
The reflection flickeredânot herâbut a crouched silhouette staring back with no face.
Unable to stay inside, Clara walked the alley beside the bakery.
There, nestled in fog, was a shed she hadnât noticed.
Its wood matched the box. The door creaked open. Inside burned a lantern. Faintly golden. On the wall: names etched in spiral script. Ages. Some crossed out.
A photo sat beneath the flame. Faded sepia. It showed a young girlâstanding beside a spiral-marked tree.
Clara.
The label beneath read:
GUEST â Solstice 1974
Her breath caught. She hadnât been born until 1993. She turned. The lantern pulsed. The mirror inside the shed reflected not herâbut the village. Empty.
Her journal flipped open on its own, pages fluttering wildly. Clara stepped back.
Outside, the fog no longer curledâit crouched.
And it knew her name.
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The Lantern of Waldsee Part II: Flickers and Whispers
Clara woke before dawn to a silence thick enough to press against her chest. She sat upright, pulse tapping in her neck. No nightmare lingeredâonly the strange certainty that something had looked in her window.
She hadnât lit the lantern.
Still, the glass pane bore no frost. No breath marks. Just a faint smearâone she hadn't noticed before.
She rose and walked barefoot through her flat. The air felt denser today, like the oxygen was being borrowed. Outside, the fog clung low to the streets, curling into alleys and between stone steps like something trying not to be seen.
She paused before the mirror.
The frame was carved from the same dark, spiraled wood as the velvet boxâshe saw that now. Not aged. Not weathered. Preserved. There was a faint scent rising from it, something between pine and ash, and when she touched the edge, warmth pulsed faintly against her fingertip.
The reflection held her face. But slightly⊠off.
Her head tilted one way, but her mirrored eyes adjusted a beat slower. Her shadow behind her bent into shape before her real posture moved.
She backed away. The floorboard beneath her creaked in threes.
A knock hit her front doorâalso in threes.
Clara turned, heart flipping sideways. No one should be visiting her this early. She stepped closer, pressed her ear against the wood.
Silence.
She waited thirty seconds.
Nothing.
When she opened the door, the street was empty. But nestled on the threshold was a wax envelope, sealed with a black spiral. She hesitated before picking it up. The envelope pulsed faintlyâlike breath beneath skin.
Inside, folded neatly, was a yellowing slip of paper.
âDer Spiegelgast kennt dich. Du warst nie allein.â (The Mirror Guest knows you. Youâve never been alone.)
The handwriting was sharp and curling, written in ink that shimmered faintly even in low light.
Later, Clara wandered into town, journal tucked beneath her coat like armor. She walked past the fountain where a trio of pigeons used to gather each morningâbut today, only fog remained. As she passed, she heard whispers.
Faint.
Layered.
Like sound passed through linen.
Names drifted past her ears: âMara⊠Felix⊠LeniâŠâ
She stopped. Leni.
Clara turned toward the stone basin.
No one.
But the whisper came againânot with sound, but memory.
âYou mustnât wait for them to knockâŠâ
Her grandmotherâs voice. Clear as rain
She staggered back. Her foot caught the fountain edge. The whisper broke, scattering like leaves in wind.
She kept walking.
The bakery was open but dim. The baker handed her a loaf without speaking, his eyes refusing hers. Clara tried small talk. He answered with fragments.
âFog came earlyâŠâ âLanterns flickered again last nightâŠâ âThe Hollow Solstice is nearâŠâ
Clara scribbled his phrases into her journal while sitting outside. She flipped to her previous entry and added one more line.
Journal Entry â Waldsee, Day 2
Thereâs a rhythm in this place. A pulse. I can feel it behind every silence. Behind every skipped word.
The mirrorâs wrong. Not broken. Just⊠delayed. Like itâs remembering how to be me.
I heard whispers. I know they werenât just wind. They spoke names. One of them was Leni.
This isnât just family history. Itâs inheritance. And Iâm not the first to be pulled back.
She returned to her flat and stared at the velvet box again. It had shifted position slightly on the desk. Or she had.
Clara lifted the lid.
Inside, the parchment from the day before now bore faint additional markingsâsymbols rising in the lamplight like pressed wax. She traced one carefully and felt a subtle vibration, as if the wood beneath her fingertips recognized her touch.
She held it beside the mirror.
The box warmed.
The mirror remained cold. But now, something moved in its background. Not behind herâbut inside it.
A flicker.
Not her.
A silhouette, crouched low.
When Clara turned to look behind her, no one stood there.
She turned back to the mirror.
The silhouette was gone.
But the reflection didnât match. Her shadow in the mirror leaned⊠forward.
She fled to the edge of the village square, unsure if fresh air would even help. The trees at Waldseeâs border pulsed slightly in the fog, shapes bending impossibly. She rubbed her arms and sat on the old bench carved from the same dark wood.
A man approached.
He looked about seventy, but moved like someone decades older. His coat was frayed at the sleeves and his hands curled into themselves.
âYou came back,â he said.
Clara blinked. âI⊠What do you mean?â
The man didnât answer directly. He stared past her shoulder. His pupils shimmered faintly. Not glowing. Just⊠noticing.
âSome guests donât leave shadows,â he murmured. âBecause they never arrived.â
She shivered. âDo you know Leni?â
âEveryone knows her,â he said. âAnd those she brought with her. Even the ones she didnât mean to bring.â
Claraâs mouth went dry.
âShe gave you the box?â he asked.
Clara nodded.
âThen your flame belongs here. Donât let it flicker.â
He turned and left without another word.
That night, Clara didnât write. She sat by the mirror and watched her reflection breathe differently than she did. Her lampâs glow dimmed slightly at midnight.
The lantern flickered. Just once. Then twice.
She didnât light it.
The mirror cracked.
Outside the window, the silhouette no longer stood.
It crouched.
Its flickering light pulsed in sync with Claraâs breath.
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