Marcella Reynolds

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#engl110mu #classnotesmu two things I learned from the presentations today are that everyone’s research process is different and that you should question yourself as you go through your research process.

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@sarah_mobarek #engl110mu this is definitely something I’ve got to work on too, sometimes my paper gets a little choppy, and leaves the reader a little confused

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@Tatianag3651 #engl110mu I need to work on my conclusions too, they’re always kind of weak and never really wrap up my essay.

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@AndrewB53232541 #engl110mu me too! I’ve got down all I need to tell my audience but it looks kind of bland :-(.

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@mfrusson #engl110mu this is something I’ve struggled with all semester! Nailing down the APA format has been a real challenge for me and I’m hoping to finally get it right this time around!

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@Kaitlyn65737540 #engl110mu I struggled with this in both my Contribution and Theory of Writing essay, maybe providing more personal experiences would help!

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#engl110mu my opening paragraph for my Final Theory of Writing. I think I start off the paragraph pretty nicely but it sort of goes downhill after that. Any suggestions?

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#engl110mu This is a paragraph in my Contribution essay, it goes over the connection between two of my articles, but it feels rushed and I’m not really sure if it makes any sense. Thoughts?

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#engl110mu this is my closing paragraph for my Contribution essay. I feel like it’s missing something, and it’s not fully wrapping up my paper. Anything I should add to it?

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#engl110mu my goals for drafting and revising are to get everything finished a few days before it’s due so I have plenty of time to look over it and get it exactly how I want it.

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#engl110mu my goals for revision this week are to go through my papers myself and then have someone else go over to get a second opinion.

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#classnotesmu #engl110mu one thing I learned today is that citations need to be on their own page.

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@tk_54321 #engl110mu this is a pretty strong introduction! It hooks the audience and provides them with a nice outlook on the theme of the paper!

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@hannahsweda2 #engl110mu I think telling the audience about your writing process would help with the paragraphs fluidity!

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@LvpastE #engl110mu this is a nice wrap up to your essay! However, I would reword the last sentence it’s a little confusing

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@Kaitlyn65737540 #engl110mu You’re doing good! I would just work on narrowing it down to focus more on your key concept.

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@sarah_mobarek #engl110mu All in all it’s pretty good, however the MLA format doesn’t equal the five paragraph format, we used them together in high school but it’s not actually apart of the mla format.

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#engl110mu The first sentence in my 4th paragraph, I feel like it could be better, maybe I could go more in depth about what I’m talking about

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#engl110mu this is my key concept, I like it but I think the way I’m wording it may confuse my audience, thoughts?

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#engl110mu this is my first sentence and I’m using it as sort of a hook, should I do something to change it? It doesn’t sound quite right to me.