@PicturesFoIder Sure. Tell. That’s fine. It TOTALLY gets your point across. I understand it isn’t illegal to yell there but that cute little drum solo could be charged as destruction of property. Oh well. At least you got your feelings out.
@totalcrushd On the flip side, Dom is in a relationship too. So why is Buddy the only one getting crap? It’s not fair to either of this respective partners to tag them in anything bc of their JOB. Jeez. Just let them do their job in creating a compelling story and let them live their lives.
@domerxo I would have mentioned that contractions were used way too much, no works cited given for the saying they used on page 1, there was horrible formatting (little to none used), and there was no side taken (can’t flip flop when you see fit, take a firm stance.)