@geostylegeo The bigger, better move. Their point could be totally right. Just agree (because they could also be wrong) but go away process what theyโve said. Do not dismiss what they said.
@verrrawest I think the writerโs vision trumps the readerโs opinion. If the writerโs vision is clear and the reader is able to understand the vision, I think the readerโs opinion is secondary although important.
@_p_rittenhouse 43yr here. Leave the US & return to your country of birth at 40. Throw yourself into your artwork but your creativity will be blocked. Youโll miss your family. Have an epiphany at the age of 42 to trade your life of caution to embrace your wildest dreams.
@verrrawest Characters that arenโt fully developed; too much description of clouds/sky/wind/farts; characters that serve no purpose; disjointed storylines; obvious exposition tactics, muddled dialogue. If I have to reread a paragraph of dialogue more than 1x, Iโm done.