This chapter is much more action packed than it was in Draft 1, and a main character gets a permanent injury that Marney will totally internalize as her fault for the rest of the book onward :)
TWhe day would lose its lightsBithout that night
Sut every tree died to make a home
“o there wasn’t a river like promised
“She’ll be without a heavy heart”
“So we can give her everything”
mIt’s the form of what she was”
emory”
Proverbs 141 Every wise woman buildeth her house: but the foolish plucketh it down with her hands.2 He that walketh in his uprightness feareth the LORD: but he that is perverse in his ways despiseth him.3 In the mouth of the…