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Loud keyboard & lots of coffee | Crime, Horror & Speculative Fiction | Adult/YA

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

What's worse than spending his winter break at his Grandpa's farm?

Gavin is about to find out..

Read "Grandpa's Farm" on Wattpad now.
https://t.co/1hofy5BtRP

#yahorror #horror #BookTwitter

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@brockpierson

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@AuthorGFAllen 50 Shades of Gray

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@GamewithDave Online poker.

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

Dear Michael/Ezekiel,

It's come to attention that you are in need of an editor.

#writingcommunity

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@kat_maryb What's leftover bacon?

[Orson Scott Card @orsonscottcard]

You don't need advice from editors on rejected manuscripts. 

My short story “Ender's Game” was rejected by Ben Bova at Analog back when that was the top market for a sci-fi story. Ben gave me feedback. He thought the title should be “Professional Soldier” and he said to “cut it in half.”

But I knew he was wrong on both points and submitted it to Jim Baen at Galaxy. He sat on it for a year, and responded to my query with a rejection. There was some kind of explanation, but I don't remember what it was. I concluded at the time that Baen's comments showed that he had barely glanced at the story.

So … I got feedback both times, but it was not helpful. I looked at Ben's rejection again. What was it about the story that made him think it should, let alone COULD, be cut in half?

Apparently it FELT long. What made it feel long? Now, post-Harry Potter, I would call it the quidditch problem. I had too many battles in which the details became tedious. So I cut two battles entirely, merely reporting the outcomes, and shortened another. In retyping the whole manuscript (pre-word-processor, that was the only way to get a clean manuscript), I added new point-of-view material to the point that I had cut only one page in length. So much for “in half.”
But I already knew that my manuscripts did not need cutting — if it wasn't needed, it wouldn't be there in the first place. Even the battles were still there, but instead of showing them, I merely told what happened (so much for the usually asinine advice “show don't tell”), which kept the pace going.

Those changes made, I sent it to Ben again. I did not remind him of what he had advised me to do. I merely told him I liked my title, and said, “I have addressed your other concerns,” which was true. I figured he wouldn't remember what his exact words had been. My answer was a check. That revised story was the basis for my winning the Campbell Award for best new writer.

Did Ben's feedback help? Yes — but his specific advice was not right, and I knew it. On my next two submissions, Ben hated my endings, and I revised as suggested. The fourth submission he rejected outright, and the fifth, and I thought, Am I a one-story writer? I went back to Ender's Game and tried to analyze why it worked. Then, deliberately imitating myself, I wrote “Mikal's Songbird.” Ben bought it, and it received favorable mentions. I was afraid then that I had consigned myself to writing stories about children in jeopardy. But in fact I was writing character stories rather than idea stories. And THAT was how I built a career, not by self-imitation, and not by following editorial suggestions.

I did get wise counsel from David Hartwell on my novel Wyrms, but that was on a book that was already under contract, and it was story feedback, not style. I got wise counsel from Beth Meacham, too, on various books over the years — but again, only on books that were under contract. I also received appallingly stupid advice from the editor of my novel Saints, which temporarily destroyed the book's marketability; after that, I was allowed to go back to my original structure and save the book — now it's one of my best.

Editors don't know more than you about your story. They especially don't know why they decide to accept or reject stories. YOU have to know what your story needs to be, and take only advice that you believe in.

Your best counselor on a story nobody bought is TIME. Let some time pass and then reread the story. Don't even think about why it Didn't Work. Instead, think about what DOES work, and then write it again, a complete rewrite, keeping nothing from the previous draft. Find the right protagonist and begin at the beginning — the point where the protagonist first gets involved with the events of the story. Be inventive — the failed first draft no longer exists, so you're not bound by any of your earlier decisions. THAT is how you resurrect a good idea you did not succeed with on your first try.

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@otokyo Lisbeth Sander

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@GamewithDave

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@GamewithDave

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@zachflipspages Definitely the greatest masterpiece I hate with a passion. 😂

[Dean Bowkett @deanpb_author]

@BenGalley Possibly the least convincing email of all time. It ticked off several spam bingo phrases 😂

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@jk_rowling @BaconRolypoly I wear hoodies AND scarves, but haven't ridden my skateboard in 20 years. 🤷‍♂️

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@kiragriffoo A Fine Balance by Rohinton Mistry

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@SophiaLiam25212 My high school Creative Writing teacher, when he wrote on my story: "You are a writer."

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@kyliebrant @Whitedale_U You should be able to just go File > Version History.

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

Gee, this doesn't sound like the product of some vibe coded Ai prompt. Nope, not at all. 😂

And a lazy one at that, Dianna.

#writerscam #aiscam #writerscommunity #DiannaTindra

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@KyleLeeWriter Are the agent and editor catching any flack as well?
This is ludicrous.
And pathetic.
And dispiriting.
And not surprising at all.

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@ParanormalJunk2 I got 20 reviews over 5 years with my first novel. 😂
https://t.co/ojjIf5MiWa

[𝚁𝚞𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝙲𝚘𝚛𝚍𝚗𝚎𝚛 @RussellCordner]

@KalFulsom Free horror short story on Wattpad.

https://t.co/q4FkrlIxPj

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@kiragriffoo