@KarineWrites Ever try a hybrid goal? I tell myself I need to spend X hours, but if I finish my ~500 words early I can be done. Of course, when that happens it means I’m on a roll, which is its own kind of motivation so I tend to keep going.
@marenmmorris Also, scenes can feel more grounded when all the senses are engaged. What smells, sounds, textures, etc. impact your POV character? How does her state of mind/immediate needs impact how she perceives in that moment?
@marenmmorris Is there room to make your descriptions more dynamic? One of the best books I’ve read with dynamic setting is “The Fifth Season” by NK Jemisin. To me, it felt like every scene was described in motion, characters interacting with their surroundings, etc.
@AvaWolfwriter Hate it when that happens! I always archive trimmed chapters and re-use what I can. Yes, you still have a novel! Are there any sub-plots you can emphasize/add? Or new barriers you can place in front of your protag to make her victory even more satisfying in the end?
@Natalie_Wanner1 @detective26AD Perhaps @VictoriaLoder_ has an opinion? There’s no extra space in a query—if it were me, I’d devote no more than a sentence or two to this.
@Natalie_Wanner1 @detective26AD Sat in on a panel where an agent addressed this. She definitely wanted to know this in the query letter. (Mentioning prior representation can work for you, because it shows you—and your project—are interesting enough to catch someone’s eye.) Best of luck!
@brennacariker For me, that’s usually the moment I realize I’m late to the party and saying anything would be like bursting into a room only to be greeted by *crickets*
@agletterman Have been lurking on Twitter for some time but now that I’m in query mode thought I’d experiment with being more active. Have to say I never expected to be nudged by a bottlenose dolphin (or some such—it’s coming at me pretty quick)!
The struggle is real...😅
“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.”
- Mark Twain
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A TALE OF TWO BETA READERS
Identical Scene Text
Beta 1: Do we need the promenade details? Don't waste my time with description that don't affect the story.
Beta 2: Why didn't you describe the promenade in more detail? I want to live in the moment & relish the description.
Okay, #WritingCommunity. I’m a bit of a craft book junky. Here are probably my top three, in no particular order:
Alice LaPlante’s “The Making of a Story”
Donald Maass’s “Writing 21st Century Fiction”
Lisa Cron’s “Wired for Story”
Any recs out there?