"Magic will bring them together. Danger will forge them into friends." Come check out War of Night, on preorder this June. Turning coffee into ink since 2019.
@guerrero_ramey I'm sorry to hear that people are giving you difficulty. I guess retellings can be problematic for some people. It sounds like you have your story, you have an interesting plot, twists that could make for some interesting characters, and something that will be uniquely yours!
@guerrero_ramey The entire point of the Chimera is that it's a weird combination! Keep it weird. Go weirder! Adding insect parts sounds awesomely horrific!
@guerrero_ramey Of your three given options, based on what you have described of the plot, I like Abandoned. And there is nothing wrong with the plot you are giving! If you want a Beta Reader, let me know. I'd be interested in reading it.
@guerrero_ramey Your title should reflect the theme of the story. No.1 sounds like a serious retelling. No.2 is more tell-all. And No.3 sounds more whimsical. So what's the mood of the book?
@guerrero_ramey Pretty close to the original, if you read between the lines. It is very much implied that Pan kills any Lost Boys that grow too old to "be any fun".
I'm using an old year's calendar, so I guess I get a free Sunday? So my new project. I have the full book outlined, and the first four chapters are now written. I'm excited to see how much I can get written this month, before I switch back to editing in June. #writersoftwitter
Don't forget to leave milk and cookies out for the Jedi tonight, and if you send your thank you emails, be sure to stick to the default, as attachments are forbidden. Happy holidays and May the 4th be with you. #amwriting#amediting#AuthorsOfTwitter#debut
This is the May!
Hmm. Favorite line? Either -“Do we abort?” she asked quietly, “Or are you just being a punk?”
“Oh, I’m totally being a bitch here, Thorn. Even so, this feels too easy.”
Or the first line of curses with gave Thorn - “Thunder-punting grot-licker!” #AuthorsOfTwitter#debut
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