GILDED WOLVES in an Arab/South Asian kingdom🕌
When his best friends are wrongly sentenced to death for stealing the prince's crown, orphan Shane must thwart a cunning vizier and solve the heist. But freeing his friends may mean exile from his only home.
#pitmad#YA#F#OWN
@3qwe_qwe3 I feel empathy immediately for the MC in this snippet so good job. However, the prose itself needs some work--ex: describe the "eerie feeling" and why its present, instead of just telling.
seeking a #cpmatch /#betareaders for an upper #MG#f adventure novel with:
-snakes and swords
-a heist
-lots of forests, castles, and alcazars
-tight friendships
-rivalries
-cryptic codes
In a lavish Irish mansion, a South Asian orphan finds...
A strange golden light.
A painting with an eerie rider.
And a black book of missing children.
He must find out what is going on before the mansion swallows his chance at a real home #SFFpit#OWN#F
GILDED WOLVES in Islamic Golden Age inspired-Kingdom🕌
When his best friends are wrongly sentenced to death for stealing the prince's crown, an orphan must thwart a cunning vizier and solve the heist. But freeing his friends may mean exile from his only home. #SFFpit#YA#F#OWN
GILDED WOLVES in Islamic Golden Age inspired-Kingdom 🕌
When his best friends are wrongly sentenced to death for stealing the prince's crown, orphan Shane must thwart a cunning vizier and solve the heist. But freeing his friends may mean exile from his only home. #SFFpit#YA#F
@Lynnette_Novak Hi Lynnette! You requested my work at December's pitmad but I was unable to submit it due to some personal issues. Should I still stick to your pitmad instructions for submission or head to querytracker?
GILDED WOLVES in Islamic Golden Age inspired-Kingdom 🕌
When his best friends are wrongly sentenced to death for stealing the prince's crown, orphan Shane must thwart a cunning vizier and solve the heist. But freeing his friends may mean exile from his only home. #IWSGpit#YA#F
GILDED WOLVES in an Arab/South Asian kingdom
When his best friends are wrongly sentenced to death for stealing the prince's crown, orphan Shane must thwart a cunning vizier and solve the heist. But freeing his friends may mean exile from his only home. #cpmatch STTP
This MS has gone through multiple rounds of edits and I'm looking for beta readers and CPs who can give me line-level advice. I don't mind if you're a beta reader and can only look at big picture though. Looking forward to sending or swapping chapters😁
might as well do a ✨giveaway✨ to kick off the new year 🌸
to win a book of your choice up to £13:
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💜 reply with a book you'd like
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💜 ends 31st January
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Good luck ✌🏽