Her lips and nostrils jutted up at the water's surface.
The seaweed clung to her, keeping her from rising any further.
Taking in bubbly wheezes of air, she spit away the salty sea.
A mermaid transforming into a human was dangerous business.
The low tide would #save her.
#vss365
Her broomstick wouldn't fly. Her crystals ground to sand.
When she caught the wizard slurping frog venom stew instead of picking up the witchlings, she #accepted it was over.
Her broomstick sprung to life.
She soared through the top of the stone tower, to a new life. #vss
Temporary hiatus break because I ran some querying stats to try and quantify just how different my experience has been since querying in 2016 re: request rates, response times, etc.
Note: The next tweet includes request rate stats. Skip if you don't like seeing those!
Last year I worked with @writementor on this video about the 7 most common issues (character, plot, voice, perspective etc) I encounter with writers I mentor. I also explain my most irreverent opinion: that the 1st line is NOT the most important... https://t.co/6ZsPC0EAYk
LJ SMITH X MARISSA MEYER
With intergalactic peace, her home & wolfishly handsome flat-mate on the line, artist Lucy (17) races to find a kidnapped tree spirit & Cross-Key & Co's disappearing stock. Not easy when 'Co' stands for vampires − in space?
#WMPitch#YA#DIS#SF#R
Rolling up my sleeves for my first writing thread in a LONG time!
Queries.
Love them, hate them--they are indispensable to "selling" your book to professionals.
There's nothing new under the sun--but there are twists, and that's what you need to show
1/12 #revpit
Logline formula (save this tweet!)
A [quick MC description] wants [goal] but [obstacle creates conflict] that causes [something bad to happen/stakes]
#RevPit
Sometimes it can help to think of all these materials you need for your sub package as nesting dolls.
Your MS=the biggest one
Synopsis=the next size down
Query= the next
Logline=the smallest
#RevPit
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