@Vecklr That could also be interesting yeah. It's up to you at the end of the day though, whichever you decide you should write until you're satisfied with the result.
@Vecklr I suddenly regret what I voted then cause I thought it would've been the story itself changing :((
All things considered though, I think it is better to have a "season finale" be a perfection of what came before and using the time after to begin experimenting? At least thats imo
@Vecklr Oh absolutely, but the thought of Torena being very watchful of his future trainees (specifically Cheval) while during the rain in case they have a "canon event" and gets hurt did make me chuckle to myself.
@Vecklr Torena: If I had a nickel for every one of my trainee's who had a breakdown in the rain I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot but it is very concerning it happenes twice.
@Vecklr Makes sense. In any case enjoy your break, needless to say that rushing the most important point of the story would be detrimental.
Take as long as you need, a 5 star meal doesn't need to be hasty to still taste good.
@Vecklr I dunno what it says about your writing. But I got two different friends of mine (who don't play nor know anything about Umamusume) to read the fic and they both called it peak and went on to actually try the game.
@Vecklr Finished reading.
My heart is in tatters, my crops have been pillaged and my soul has been given to the dark gods.
I said this in a comment last chapter. But the way you do narration and give each character a "voice" is some of the best I've seen in writing period. I love it.