Asonti Thompson

hello :))

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The two things I have learned from my peers is that you can get a professor to peer review your paper and then get help from Millersville assistance if needed. #engl110mu #classnotesmu

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@VinciguerraElla I have to also do the same thing ! #engl110mu

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@A1Audrey I agree my notes have helped me improve my work. #engl110mu

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@AndrewB53232541 I have the same goals for this week. #engl110mu

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@GriffinLeib Never thought about adding that aspect into my zine, thank you for the idea !

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@Joey61354045 I learned the same thing I had to look up a video to see how you correctly format. #engl110mu

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For my Theory of writing i’m struggling with adding another a page of information to it. #engl110mu

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For my Portfolio Contribution essay I need to finish the essay that goes with it then submit it. #engl110mu

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In the multimodal I need to finish the Zine Project. Does anyone have any tips on how they completed there’s or yours is going? #engl110mu

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My goals for drafting is to my all the information I have learned throughout this course to make my essay sound better. #engl110mu

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My goals for revision this week is to improve my essays to make them better and fix my mistakes I have made before. #engl110mu

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I am going to start with my Contribution Essay. #engl110mu #classnotesmu

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@A1Audrey I agree I used to always write in the five paragraph essay format now I have branched out from it ! #engl110mu

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@AndrewB53232541 I agree my writing seems to flow now because I am aware of my transitions. #engl110mu

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@jon_rivera24 my format looks similar to yours so i would say they are correct. #engl110mu

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@VinciguerraElla I agree my outline had helped me succeed in writing. #engl110mu

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@Tatianag3651 yes i agree my writing process has changed tremendously since high school. #engl110mu

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@Daniell29408927 okay thank you !

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what can I do to improve this paragraph? #engl110mu

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I used Reid’s article because she gave me good tips on how to become a successful writer. For example she explains the importance of your audience, ethos, the importance of the use of details and more. #engl110mu