If your story feels โoffโโฆ
but you canโt explain why..
Thatโs usually where readers drop off.
Be honest:
Do YOU know whatโs not working in your draft right now?
Yes or no?
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Your writing isnโt the problem.
Your story just isnโt holding attention.
Be honest....
Where do you think readers start losing interest in your draft?
First page, chapter 3, or later?
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@KR_Ludlow Love that, sunshine, daisies, and totally harmless trolls
That said, Iโm exactly the kind of beta reader whoโll still clock pacing dips, character inconsistencies, and where the hook might slip.
If youโre open to sharp, honest feedback, Iโd be happy to take a look.