Tommy Horner

ENGL 1101 SX

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#ReflectOn1101SX This gif sums up my final portfolio!

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Do you want our reflection to be on our final draft or on another doc @1101Mauk

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@maria21dangelo My peer edit of your 2nd draft is on my wix site check it out! It was a good draft.

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

@maria21dangelo I requested access to edit your Draft Two!

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

My 2nd Draft is done and on my wix site for peer editing.

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#Toneitdown1101 The writers academic tone is he is trying to show the audience how alcohol can affect college students.

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The students organization was pretty good as he laid out his paragraphs good and he indented all of them.Overall the organization is good for a draft. #OrganizeIt1101

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The student also gets evidence from a student at FSU that is pledging a frat and has never drunken before college and how his experience is. #ProveIt1101

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The student has many uses of evidence in his draft like using quotes from a author in a book called “Teen Drinking”. He uses quotes from this to show what alcohol is and what it can do #ProveIt1101

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The second scene and tone makes the movies seem as if it is about the man and what he has gone through before that scene. #SoundOfTone1101

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

The second tone makes the scene feel more saddening and depressed. #SoundOfTone1101

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I assume that the movie is about the man in the pool and something that he has to do or go through in the movie. #SoundOfTone1101

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

The first scene shown is a very chill and relaxing scene as the man is laying in the pool with music playing in the background. #SoundOfTone1101

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#SoundOfTone1101 I have been using the phrase “I believe” a lot in my writing I need to fix that.

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#AcademicallySpeaking1101

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@BirukShama is your outline on your website I cannot find it.

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#OutlineYourPOVSX My outline is on my site and it is ready to be edited!

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#Outlinethis1101 I think that I need to make my point more clear in my outline to make it more professional.

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#1101Researches My goal for my research moving forward is to find better information for my outline and drafts to make it more appealing to the audience.

[Tommy Horner @TommyHorner5]

#1101Researches One thing that surprised me was how hard it was to find information. In high school it was basically given to us here it is not.