Robert Brown

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway 6th draft? Guess I'll have to reread it!

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway The descriptions of the MC's home village are perfectly crafted to give the reader a love and yearning for a Shire that has already been invaded.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway I was thinking about doing some art for it too, but given the nature of the thing, I didn't plan to post it before showing you and getting permission.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway Also, book 3 is so light on Draco that the only canon Malfoid event is Buckbeak. The yearning has been gold, but I'd be surprised if no one fell off due to impatience for the Yule Ball.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway Book 2 was expected until the end when the demons got sizzled. Book 3 has been the sieve, it's much more ABOUT faith and being Christian, which a lot of people bounced off. And then a bunch of people didn't like hearing references to other IPs.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway I don't know if it's a distaste for "crossovers," or a second update in one day, but I did think it was a little more quiet in the comments.

Even not knowing much of anything about John Constantine, I really liked this chapter.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway > Dracina tells Harry she loves him.
The comments go completely insane with cheering.
>"He didn't hear any of it."
Comments go completely insane all over again.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway I never played Myst, but I can just imagine all the people who hate crossovers screaming and crying after next chapter and the interlude. The elf magic transforming Lupin out of his warform was awesome.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway Great chapter! My only critique is you skipped a line of Stan's again, causing Fudge to react to something that didn't happen.

[taoki @justalexoki]

Jesus Christ, the Son of God, loves you, an evil and retarded sinner

[LatterDayBased @LatterDayBasedX]

W Elder L Tom Perry

The Brethren Know!

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway Yeah, time travel is wonky like that. If we notice any issues, we'll let you know.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@Stormcrow1900 @NWBroJaneway I'm most interested to see how he adapts Hermione's activism. Goblet of Fire is when she starts up S.P.E.W. and this book already mentioned the school's house elves a couple times with no comment from her.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway His name was Sanguini, and he was at one of Slughorn's parties. He was mostly there as a joke.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway I was already excited, you don't have to convince me. I'm excited to see Harry overcome the doubts that Lupin's transformation and the dementors brought on.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@JambonCrue @NWBroJaneway No, that's a movie thing. In the book, the Patil twins are whisked away by Beauxbatons boys during the Yule Ball.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway I'm pretty good with voices generally, but I'm American. I'll throw my hat in the ring anyway.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@JambonCrue @NWBroJaneway You could be one of the extras from Beauxbatons in book 4.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@NWBroJaneway Getting to it late after a long night finishing your book, which was great. To anyone else reading this, DM him for the link. It's so good.

[Robert Brown @Treebohr]

@ElgarniHassan @NWBroJaneway Noticing racial stereotypes is racist now, so Ron making jokes about "Footballers" to Dean, Hermione moving Parvati across a room while commenting about a smell, and the multiple references to Je- (((goblins))) put people's panties in a twist.