@DuckaIII@nonregemesse@3eyesisenough The "crownlands" were part of a larger Stormlands and the Riverlands were under the control of the Iron Isles (Harrenhal was the seat and castle built by an Iron Islander). Dorne was claimed by the Targaryens but were not officially controlled until much later.
@theAliceRoberts@frankcottrell_b@holland_tom@TimONeill007 Please tackle some of the points the review actually brought up instead of just saying he didn't like it before he read it. Well, he did read it and wrote a very long review detailing his problems with it. Engage with them with the time he gave your book which you seem to ignore.