my landing page experiment 🧪
say goodbye to buzzwords like “supercharge” or “transform” in your headline copy please.
also make your hero image intentional
this is was an experiment and the brand is not a client (yet)
I LOVE this hero section 🔥
Here’s why it works:
> Clear headline:
“Grow & Monetize Your LinkedIn.” Four words, two desires, nothing more.
> Social proof baked in:
70 Top Voices, 30k+ students. Lands before you even see the offer.
> Transformation in one sentence:
2k to 700k followers, $9.3M revenue. Answers the skeptic before they can object.
> Specific numbers:
$9.3M, not $9M. Specificity signals honesty.
> Anchored CTA:
$200 slashed down to $79 feels like $121 saved. I would have added that to the CTA to make the ICP know that they are 1) saving money 2) saving $121
> No hedging:
Zero “world-class,” zero “comprehensive framework.” Instead, the copywriter used a direct claim backed by math.