ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ

"I have to make a decision..."
[#Asch] #RWBYRP, #MVRP, #RP

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

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| "Who is Cinder Fall?
| I know who I was,
| who I'm going to be.
| But who am I?"

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ Second update:

1. Added some new ideas and concepts.
2. Wrote the first ad for a procedure important to the story, made by a company which plays a prominent role in the lore.

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[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ Some of you told me again and again, that when I'm so unhappy with how RWBY is written and how the characters are handled, I should just write my own story.

Guess what?

I just began doing exactly that! I'm currently in the world building phase.

Stay tuned for updates!

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ First update: Already wrote about 3 pages of:
1. General ideas
and
2. Rules of the world and storytelling today.

I really made a lot of progress in just one day. If I can keep this up, the first actual story in my world may come out sooner than expected!

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

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on the fly. Wouldn't be the first time RT sacrifices consistent writing in favor of convenient writing to make their intended plot work...

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ Another thing which really bothers me about #RWBY, is the lack of - and with the latest episode end of - Cinder's and Ruby's rivalry.

The two characters we're supposed to believe to have a very intense rivalry due to the events in the show, only met !4! times.

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[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

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the case.

So yeah, the face to face rivalry is over, cause Cinder will never be able to go 1v1 with the deus ex machina wielding girl.

Clever and quality writing on RT's end yet again. But hey, maybe they decide to nerf the silver eyes or buff Cin for a certain scene

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[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@FallMaiden ¦¦ I don't need to put anything anywhere. They are doing a great job of making themselves look bad with every passing volume.

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ Oh and guys, if you haven't realized already, @kerryshawcross's tweet about 'we decided against post credit scenes to avoid crunch and already work on V8' is him saying, that they already decided to shield themselves from any criticism about what was bad in the current volume.

[Whorinmaru @Whorinmaru]

I found it very inconsistent.

She was struggling to do it merely a few episodes ago, but now she can do it on command? Immediately?

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@FallMaiden ¦¦ It is, when you read between the lines.

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@SpardasonRP ¦¦ Yeah...that was one of the things I can't understand, no matter how I look at it. It just doesn't make any sense.

Just like Cinder waking up the winter Maiden for no apparent reason, other than to serve the plot and score another defeat.

Incompetence it probably is.

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

¦¦ You know what the biggest problem of RWBY is?

No, although for me personally it's the way they treat Cinder, I mean something way bigger:

The world feels shallow.

Everything happens and everyone exists just for one reason: To be a plot device for RWBY and crew.

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[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@SpardasonRP ¦¦ See, that's the thing which really bothers me about how RT handles Cin.

If you want to do a non-cheesy redemption arc, there are ways to do it. They are either too incompetent or just don't want her to go that route, which is a shame imo.

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@SpardasonRP —

-- This COULD work --

[ᑢᓰᘉᕲᘿᖇ ᖴᗩᒪᒪ @_LittleEmber_]

@SpardasonRP —

Cinder offers valuable information about Salem.

Ruby on the other hand gets an opportunity to show she's an actual hero, capable to forgive. She accepts their offer and silences the other members who actually want to kill Cin - especially Jaune - for what she did.

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