Alessandra

sophomore at @RutgersU - intro to multimedia composition

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

LTMP No. 2 -- "Brain Rot or Storytelling?"

https://t.co/wnYqK2CynD

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@MeganT209 Your use of captions in this project was very good as well. Without them, it would have been extremely difficult for the audience to stay engaged. The captions didn't interfere with the what was being shown, but instead helped to connect both the video and audio #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@MeganT209 It was interesting to see how organic chemistry and outfit experiments related in this project. Throughout the video, I noticed how bonds and elements come together to make one specific thing, which is similar to how outfits are put together with accessories and stuff #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@MeganT209 This project perfectly embodied the goals and purpose of LTMP No. 2. You were able to take a seemingly uninteresting topic such as organic chemistry, and were able to speak about and present it in a way that the audience would stay engaged #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@realvitaminlee I, personally, feel inspired by your project. Previously, I have never heard of the events in Myanmar, so it was compelling to hear the story of what has been happening while also watching something that I do regularly, like brushing my teeth or studying #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@realvitaminlee I believe that someone like Patty would be inspired by your project. You both used audio and visuals similarly. In your project, like in Painted Dreams, the audio and video did not match, but still came together to tell an overall story #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@realvitaminlee This project considers r/Reality very well. Although the audio is talking about one event, the video is very different, but the fit together very well. Its interesting to hear something so violent and see something that's soothing and somewhat mundane #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@realvitaminlee The beginning of your project is so good. The background music with the black screen immediately captures the audience. Then, the change to the alarm, bring people right into your topic and makes sure they stay engages #videoparty

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@sunita_bhowmikk I think the two main things you can maybe focus on for the final version is the audio and adjusting volumes so the audience can better hear the main speaker and also adding a small ending scene #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@sunita_bhowmikk There isnt a third party really introduced at the end and there isn't a set closing scene really. I would maybe add something, even if its small, would help to close the project #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@sunita_bhowmikk Yes, its very clear how you considered r/Reality in this project. The audio essentially explained how serial killers become who they are which is an interesting topic and forces people to think differently #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@sunita_bhowmikk I honestly dont think anything needs to be cut and I cant think of anything crazy that needs to be added. One recommendation I do have though is to lower the background sounds so we can hear the main audio better #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@sunita_bhowmikk Your project is really good and interesting and talks about the psychological makeup of serial killers and how people's upbringings can affect their minds and affect the way they percieve positive or negative actions (such as different crimes like murder) #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@Adi_n1829 I think the main thing you should focus on right now for the final version is making cuts. The video was very long and I think you might lose the audience's attention if you keep all the clips #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@Adi_n1829 There isnt a very noticeable third party at the end of the video. I really like how you ended the video and were speaking directly to the viewers and this is something I would probably keep in your final version #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@Adi_n1829 I believe that your project talks about r/Reality well because it talks about real life events and also an intangible, online social media platform, tiktok. I think it shows a different relationship between the two topics which adds depth to your project #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@Adi_n1829 I believe that there needs to be a couple different things cut. I think you should maybe cut clips that arent pertinent to your topic such as at 5:33 you say "these are the moving images I have...". I would maybe cut this and move right into explaining your topics #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@Adi_n1829 this project is very thorough and detailed. it explains the situation in the democratic republic of congo whilst also showing its relationship with the rise and popularity of social media and more specifically platforms such as tiktok #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@RimYoora49964 i don't think a lot needs to be changed for this project. I would maybe make the screen recordings of the tiktoks and phone screen larger on the screen, but honestly, I really liked this project's message and how it was filmed #peerreview3

[Alessandra @alessandraa209]

@RimYoora49964 i think the project ends really well. There is a final slide with a caption that helps to end the whole video. I really think that this ties in well with the overall concept. I think I would maybe extend the heartbeat audio to fully tie everything together #peerreview3