This unusual cloud over Australia,
formed when rain evaporates below a parent storm, moisture is in the air leading to a secondary cloud formation. Called a scud cloud and darkened by its position relative to the sun 1/2
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Shorter isn't better.
Don't write: "He was tall."
Write: "He banged his head on every doorway he went through."
Show, don't tell.
Even if it takes longer.