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[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Excellent execution😀 I've been waiting a long time for this photo shoot; after all, this is how they market themselves online and sell their products better. I wonder what comes next😉.
Perhaps Emily goes riding with the boys and takes turns having fun with them along the way.

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Don´t get me wrong. Your story telling is top notch. The criticism revolves only around the cherry on your cake, but not around the cake itself. I just wanted to point out where improvements could be made to further enhance your fantastic story telling.

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Emily´s facial expressions are the glue/cohesion, so an inserted cowboy shot at 4:04min & 4:17min. would make the sequence even more natural. Last: A medium shot from head to chest at 4:53 min with open eyes would round it all off nicely.

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Examples: An inserted cowboy shot at 1:22min would smoothen the abrupt camera jump and make sequence keener to eye. The f*ck sequence starts at 3:13 and we won´t see Emily´s face again before 4:41 (too long) so an inserted cowboy shot at 3:26 adds more cohesion

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX A few more cowboy shots (camera angle from head to thighs/knees) at certain points would break up the sequences &make transitions smoother. Sometimes jumps between camera angles are too abrupt or two consecutive shots are too similar and could be broken up

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX The glory hole idea is great (but I hope it's only for passing horses, as the boys are taken care of anyway). Wouldn't it be nice - also in keeping with the photos -to set up a wooden terrace with a lounge area, armchairs, a table and a hammock next to the stable? Girls love it

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX While the girls make most money by selling photos of Amy and Marv, they hardly ever take photos. For a change Emily could perhaps put the camera on a tripod and (secretly) practice posing with the boys –using all her femininity to tease them to prepare next photo session with Amy

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Like a flipbook, just spread the dick´s penetration across more pictures: 1st pic =10cm distance 2pussy, 2nd pic = 5cm dist., 3rd picture =touching pus, 4th pic =glans halfway in, 5th pic = glans fully in, 6th pic =shaft 5cm deep, 7th pic = shaft 10cm [...], 9th pic =reversing...

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX I just love it, but here is my critique: As there are only 2 images simulating the movements of her boys penetrate or pull out of Emily, transitions always appear very harsh/abrupt, not keen to the eye,whereas it could be smoother with a few more images added

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX To further improve camera angles & visual story telling I rather recommend: Film Directing Shot by Shot: Visualizing from Concept to Screen by Steven D. Katz. I´d love to see more eye contact between Emily & her boys (mostly knee shots) to increase depth/intimacy

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX What a great release after so much tease! Hopefully next time you don´t wait till the balls are dark blue😉. Tease-tease-release-tease-release-release-tease… or similar order but unpredictable. 😉Emily´s facial expressions and gestures are unmatched!!!

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX It could be even funnier if we suddenly see Emily from the perspective of one of the horses, who might be having an inner dialogue with a male voice (Why isn't she doing that with me? Am I the cuckold here?)

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX An unpredictable Energy Change could be a neighbor secretly watching Emily &Co in action. A new episode could surprisingly open with the neighbour speaking into her dictating machine so we see what Emily did meantime - partly through the neigbours eyes – a different standpoint

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX An erotic film captivates when visual teasing, emotional intimacy, and clear shifts in energy are rhythmically edited together—so that attraction is not only shown, but built up, delayed (tease), and finally released through action at the right moments (climax).

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Now it´s time for a change of energy. In erotic stories, the energy rhythm is = arousal + variety + release/sexual climax. In normal stories, one could roughly speak of an ongoing, unforeseeable alternation between revelation (tease) and action (sex)

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Great tease to have the girls really get to know each other and even save the fistin for later instead of getting down to business. It makes perfectly sense to skip ´finishing the boys off´ to focus on Amy doing Emily. Great scene about emotional connection & intimacy!!!

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX ´Whatever I do to a coc, Amy would do to me´, hopefully means that after Emily allows the boys to penetrate her, she allows Amy to mimic them using her fist and vice versa…starting an erotic menage a trois respectively quatre

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Given the fact that Emily needs an open framework to climb up and hold on to, to be f*ckd by horses, perhaps the shed could be made wider and an open framework could be placed in the middle, dividing she shed into two boxes for Marv and Spence. And a table for more games.

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX For improvement😉: Whereas the shed in earlier episodes like EP16... already has wooden walls, those are missing in EP18&19 (where the shed´s sides & roof are merely an open framework of beams Emily holds onto for Marv). Then in EP20&22 the walls return out of (Continuity error)

[athens8 @athensparta]

@Pleasuree3DX Slowly Spence gets better at it, but subdueing her spasms causes Emily tears in her eyes – she even bites her hand withholding her orgasm, but then she is rewarded with lots of cum & the most intense climax. The juice gushes out of her into the bucket under her as Spence retreats