ayanfe

I’m a book lover and beta reader who enjoys getting lost in new stories. I love giving honest feedback on what works, what could be better, and how a story feel

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@sarabushway Honestly that’s impressive especially getting that far without an outline. Do you just let the story develop as you write?

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@sarahdauthor 😂 I’ll definitely be keeping an eye out for it. How’s Chapter 10 going so far?

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@sarahdauthor 5 pages already? You’re moving fast 😂 Congrats on getting Chapter 9 done, hope Chapter 10 keeps going smoothly

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@sarahdauthor Fair enough 😂 guess I’ll have to wait and see what Chapter 10 brings

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@bymallorymcd okay now I really wanna know who it is

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@sarabushway Ohh you’re pretty far into it then 😂 How’s it been going so far?

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@SarahJaynePom Fr 😂 there’s a whole world being built in our heads and we just look crazy from the outside

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@novelistana What type of stuff do you write?

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@sarabushway Ohh okayy, that sounds dark. How far along are you with it?

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@NovelistNotions Ohh that sounds interesting, I’ll give it a read. I actually do paid beta reading too, so if you’ve got any other stories or a manuscript you want feedback on, I’d be happy to take a look.

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@NovelistNotions Oh nice, what’s the short story about?

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@SarahJaynePom Literally 😂 somehow staring at nothing is part of the writing process

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@x_snips That sounds really interesting ngl 😭 I’m a big fan of stories with good characters too. What’s the book called?

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@aDarkRainbow13 5 chapters in one day is pretty good 😭 if it reads quickly, that could just mean the pacing is working. What kind of story is it?

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@HJames_Writes 4 chapters in one day is solid 😭 glad the revision is feeling right this time. What made you decide to turn it into a thriller romance?

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@MillerDakotaJ I like the idea of starting serious and then hitting the reader with the joke 😂 curious to see how the opening turns out.

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@sarabushway You don’t have to keep them in a fixed order. I think it depends on what works best for the story and where the POV switch makes the most sense.

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@novelistana @librariebooks Exactly 😭 small progress still adds up. And when you’re ready for someone to read through it and give you honest feedback, I’d be happy to beta read it.

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@librariebooks Honestly 300 words is still 300 more than nothing 😭 hope you get back into your flow soon.